art critique? O__O

[kimiko]

ZOMG Moon!! You're siggie is ultra cuutee!!!



Oh, here's a tip on controlling your pencil lines:

x.. When drawing, do not press the pencil hardly onto the paper. This might caused a messy result in the end.

x.. It is better to draw using a mechanical pencil for it has a smooth friction, causing the result to look good.

x.. When drawing the hair, try not to use much lines for of course, it would cause a messy result.

x.. When coming to drawing the neck, note that from the neck to the collarbone, it has a "hanger-like" shape.

X.. If you want to draw the nose, just add in a " . " on the place you want it to be.

x - - - - - - - - - -x

You know what? I think I could make a tutorial without using images already o.o

But yea, that's the tips I used when drawing manga characters, just like my drawing that I had shown you before. Hope it at least helps you!



-- Drifter

[Moonzzz]

thanks
i will work on that.

[b√αиk]

..............................*speechles with jaw hanging*

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Moonstar, I swear you need to teach me. Magna is so cool but I'm still stuggling with just cartoons. *sighs* I do need help. But yours are just like. *jaw drops* JAW DROPPING! I like can't even make people's faces they suck and yep well... So anyways I'm just gunna say POST more I love them! Good Job!

[Moonzzz]

i feel like a queen with all those compliments!

Blank, just draw draw draw tha tis the only way you will ever get better! i am defiantly not good enough to teach, but drifter sure is! Ask her!!!!!!!!!!!!;D and goodluck!

[kimiko]

XD WOW!! Another one is keen to learn!! Whoopy!

Thanks Moon!! *huggles too tightly* I'm always open to help you regarding drawing manga!

And...


+. . .Good Luck!! [/font]. . . +


*sighs* If I could scan up my colored drawings, I could teach you guys the easy way D8 Maybe I could even open a shop for requests!

....... Wow, dream on drifter XP




Oooh! Of course you're the queen around these areas Moon! You're good for a beginner 8O

*stares at own drawings* Now..... on to color them!! *grabs color pencils*[/size]

[miss. s k i p]

Okay. I drew my first one. It's was supposed to be a happy little girl, but somehow warped into a sad little girl with cute baby-like pudgy cheeks, looking as if she was about to cry with tears welling up. I think her face is too big at the bottom, but I don't know.

[kimiko]

Aww!! Ish' so darn cuuutteee!! 8>
Keep 'em coming!!

[miss. s k i p]

She is pretty darn cute. *snatches pencils and gets to work* Will do! XD

[miss. s k i p]

Okay. Just realized what I have been doing wrong. I'm making the mouth way too high. Ahhhh.

[kimiko]

Hmm, sort-of but still, yours come out cuute
I suggest to you that you keep on practicing the head. It's always the first thing you would succeed in =]

Once my scanner is fixed, I'll teach you both of drawing the rest of the body parts. But....

D@#%#$FD!!

THE SCANNER IS NOT BEING NICE TO ME!!! DDD8

[Moonzzz]

ya, my scanner hates me too *pats on back* they have no decency at all

*tis tis*

XD

[kimiko]

*sniff*
Mhm. No kidding, it seriously hates me O.O

XD

Ah! How's your artwork going Moon?? Any improvement??

[Moonzzz]

sort of yes i just havent finished any of my pics XD

[kimiko]

That's great news!

I'd love to see you latest art pieces!!

[Moonzzz]

once i get time i will X]

and, omg omg omg omg omg i am so excited!
Halloween is my fave holiday

guess why

-_- if you dont know hwy, then look at my siggie. if you still dont, then i am sorry, but you are mentally disfigured...