art critique? O__O

[Moonzzz]

i drew this a couple days ago:



welll, what do ya think?

[Moonzzz]

a couple more:


this one isnt so good


I really like this one, but you can see where i have earased alot

[kimiko]

Splendid! They're all marvellous! You know, I could post a tutorial on drawing manga/anime! ^_^

If you agree, I'll post to you some examples done by me =] That is, to confirm if you agree on me teaching you drawing them my way.

Overall, I'd LOVE to help you out on drawing them!!

Now, on to the critique!

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1st Drawing:
I just adore the posing and trust me, you have a creative mind there ^_-

2nd Drawing:
The expression tells it all! I mean, it really suits your theme on the drawing. =]

3rd Drawing:
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How should I say this.....


IT'S SO ADORABLE!! *spazzes*

*dies of cuteness overload*

[Moonzzz]

why thank you! I have to admit, that i have been looking all over for something to help me further my "career" in manga/anime drawing! ;D I cant beleive i havent really met you yet! just form one post i have read form you, i already think your awsome, but that is beyond the point! XD
sorry, i have a case of some sort of wacked out ADHD XDXDXDXD
anyways, the first one, well i am a total Naruto freak! i hate the english ones though cuz everything is corny. So i watch shippuuden, but agian, beyond da point. So i was thinking what type a character i would be if i was a naruto one, and i started drawing pics like that. But this one is by-far my best. (as for naruto XDXD)
The second one, well i dont like it as much. I coudve done better on the people walking away. But i do like it. ;D
Then the third one. Well i get the idea form this video
(warning it us long)
So i sorta stole the idea of the mouth and body structure!

anyways, yes i would love a little tutorial on Manga/anime drawing. I am proud, but i never give a possibility of learning for the better! XD
AND another ADHD thing
your awsome





awww look at the kitty......................................

[kimiko]

Aww~! *sniff* What touching words =']
Know what? I love you character, alot. You are keen to learn from your mistakes that you might make and to learn due to making the picture perfect. And that is the type of art student I'm searching for =]

Now! On to the drawing I promised you! While you wait on the tutorial that is. And yes, if you want me to teach coloring, I'm all better with

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Now! The tutorial will have to wait XP
But I'll try to finish it off sooner than expected!!

Aaand...I know this might be random buut...

Click Here

[kimiko]

Uhm... *nervous*. I kinda have bad news for you...

I wanted to use my dad's camera to take snapshots for the steps needed but it seems like he's being a tough knot.... The good news is that there's an AWESOME site for drawing manga! Well, two of them. I recommend the 1st one cause I learned my drawings first hand, at that site. If you have troubles of following the tutorial, use the 2nd site.

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Really.....

I feel terrible D8....
I seriously want to help you out but due to some.... disturbance *growls at dad*, I could only suggest you some sites that are able to help you out. I mean, I NEVER want to say I can't make it just like that! Somehow, I need to make it up to you!

Manga University

Manga Revolution
Note that at the bottom of this site's page, there's a "next" button to bring you to the other lessons provided.

Darn! I still feel bad!!! ='[[[

[Moonzzz]

OMG i love carmel dancing! yay! i love the cats with the kits on their heads

anyways, lol *ADHD yhing sorry XD*
that is fine, dont feel bad if you were going to take pics of the screen, heres an idea
if you have MSpaint, then you can take screen shots
heres how:
press the button on the righttop side of your keybord. it is called print screen
then go to a fresh Mspaint thing and press ctrl+c

anyways, ok i will use those sites! thank you a whole bunch!!!
*gives a thank you huggle*

[kimiko]

OMG Really??! *huggles you too tightly* Thank you!!


Kufufufu....The dance gives me an evil plan... *staggers towards neighbour's cat with cheerleader costume*

Fufufu.... this will not hurt...
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To be continued...

XDD

[Moonzzz]

lol XD
the picture i produced through the tutorial (note: isnt so good)

ok here it is:




hee hee i have bad hand writing XD

[kimiko]

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ZOMG!! It's really,really good! I mean-- at least you could get the body right! I tried that pose for the first time and....

It turned into a tree T.T

[Moonzzz]

XD lol a tree X]

[kimiko]

Yes.....a tree....T.T

Ah wells! I got to get it right in the end =D

[Moonzzz]

lol
another pick (more work on the face in this one)





her left arm and i were not agreeing XD

[miss. s k i p]

Wow this is so cool! I always wanted to learn manga! One time a televison show was on with manga characters and, thank the lord for DVR, I paused it the show at a good shot o f the girls face and spent a long time trying to make magic. It turned out pretty cool; but nowhere near good. XP

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Maybe I'll figure it out.

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We'll just wait and see. If you don't mind Moonstar, I'd like to post some manga stuff if I ever make anything 'internet suitable.' But if you'd rather I can post it on my art critique thread.

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Check back soon; hopefully!

XD

Da Skippeh

[Moonzzz]

i dont mind at all Skippy ;D

that last pic i put up, isnt my favorite...
i am going to make an anime kitty!!!!!

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be back later!
moon