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Aug 25, 2008 19:41:14 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Aug 25, 2008 19:41:14 GMT -5
I swear I already replied to this today on here, but I guess I didn't hit post reply. Oh well. I really liked this poem! Amazing! A girl at our school had cancer and was a really great poem writer too. She passed away later. =( What a true poem! I love how she used dancing as a was to describe living your life. I LOVE that!
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Moonzzz
Cotton Candy
People who dont know me think i am quiet, people who do wish i was[D3v:moonshade20]
Posts: 365
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Aug 25, 2008 22:31:04 GMT -5
Post by Moonzzz on Aug 25, 2008 22:31:04 GMT -5
i know right? really opened my eyes
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Aug 30, 2008 12:22:34 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Aug 30, 2008 12:22:34 GMT -5
When your having a bad day, I'll stick with you to the end. Everything will be okay, I'll always be your friend.
When you have a loved one die, all my comfort I will lend. I'll be with you when you cry, I'll always be your friend.
When you move far away, a long letter I will send, In my mind you'll always stay, I'll always be your friend.
When you grow old and pass, it will take time for my heart to mend. I will place flowers where you lay dirt and grass, because you were much more then a friend.
-skip
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Aug 30, 2008 12:33:29 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Aug 30, 2008 12:33:29 GMT -5
I think I love you, I think your more then just a friend, Oh only if you knew, I guess for now I'll just pretend.
Your presence makes me blind, although I like you in my view. I search for words I could never find, at me your brilliant smile you threw.
I have radar in my brain, your the beeping red dot. My friends think I'm insane, I stare at you and hope I don't get caught. -skip
[not good, but oh well.]
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Moonzzz
Cotton Candy
People who dont know me think i am quiet, people who do wish i was[D3v:moonshade20]
Posts: 365
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Sept 7, 2008 12:54:21 GMT -5
Post by Moonzzz on Sept 7, 2008 12:54:21 GMT -5
ooc: no i am not emo
My life--------
My life Never cuts slack My knife always cuts, that's a fact
My blood Oozes from my arm It was dud I didnòt reach a vein, darn!
My scars all over Im inside bars I need a four leaf clover
My attempt For suicide Failed once again Why wont they just step aside
My Heart Is broken They are aiming the dart Their golden token
Why cant I Just move on? Because in that sky Those rain clouds aren't gone
Ooc: I am not an EMO!!! I don't cut myself..yadda yadda yadda
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Sept 18, 2008 19:09:16 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Sept 18, 2008 19:09:16 GMT -5
I stretch my hands up to the sky, I imagine that I could fly. I would soar up in the sky, and all the world would pass me by.
Back in reality I'm surrounded by morning fog, I feel my legs break into a jog. The cold dew slips off the grass, wetting my feet as I pass.
I keep my vision pointed ahead, not really worried about were I tread. I spot the dip but do not stop, I'm coming to a waterfall's rushing top.
I had followed the winding creek, many times before to this very peak. But never before had I given this a go, leaping into the pool so far below.
My body pointed into a dive, when the cool water hit me I felt so alive. I closed my eyes wanting the moment to last, but life is life and its always too fast.
-skip
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Moonzzz
Cotton Candy
People who dont know me think i am quiet, people who do wish i was[D3v:moonshade20]
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Sept 20, 2008 13:45:08 GMT -5
Post by Moonzzz on Sept 20, 2008 13:45:08 GMT -5
i did this for a book project. we had to write a ryming poem on the book we were reading. what do you think of this for the book Steal away home?
Steal Away Home------ A poem.
Get away slaves; You better run fast! The white man’s ways Certainly wont last The slave catcher’s laugh Filled with evil Haven’t you done the math? Their punishments are not medieval Run Run Steal away home Before your done Oh how happy you will become Don’t hesitate While your feet pound the ground Just get away
As you may have already found They wont cut slack They will burn every town Until they find and get you back
Don’t let us down Make to the north Steal away home You will know its worth Oh how happy you will become
Run run Steal away home Before your done And enjoy what you have become
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Sept 21, 2008 15:01:07 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Sept 21, 2008 15:01:07 GMT -5
Wow Moonstar! Thats really good! I've never read the book, but it is really good!
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Sept 23, 2008 15:08:25 GMT -5
Post by rainbow-FiSHY on Sept 23, 2008 15:08:25 GMT -5
Silent paws Across the ground Can you hear that beautiful sound? Silent paws You cannot hear- They're silent paws Across the ground. If you hear Silent paws Silent paws Aren't silent paws As they walk Across this earth The steady beat The earth feels But these silent paws Would be heard One day For they're silent paws They cannot speak But they can walk Silently Unnoticed
Silent cats Their mouth shut tight They do not speak. They cannot speak. They lash their tail But make no sound. They bare their teeth But make no sound. Silent cats with silent paws Walk this earth The steady beat The earth feels But these silent cats Won't be heard Ever
Silence is a dose of poison Into life. When you need them Who will hear? No one.
-Fishy
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Moonzzz
Cotton Candy
People who dont know me think i am quiet, people who do wish i was[D3v:moonshade20]
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Sept 23, 2008 21:02:30 GMT -5
Post by Moonzzz on Sept 23, 2008 21:02:30 GMT -5
-claps- GOOD JOB!! ness lol
lemme give it a shot...
A shining light----
Darkness creeps ; The midnight sky. The girl weeps; not knowing why. The tears just fell, into complete darkness, like falling down a well. Life is such a mess! she would always say As her life fell apart. there was no better way flying by like a dart.
She opened up the doors Entering the church. The floor is yours would you begin your search?
His holy spririt now gladly guides you "So you did it" said a few "You found him" "In such might!" you would answer them; "I found his shining light"
--Moonstar
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Sept 24, 2008 15:10:55 GMT -5
Post by rainbow-FiSHY on Sept 24, 2008 15:10:55 GMT -5
Ooo...You're great at this too! Hmm...lemme give this one a try...
Tear drops on a little book - Why they're there? Let's take a look.
Tear drops on the second page - Splattered over just like rain Crinkled up, wrinkled with age
Tear drops on the dedication - Smudged the words you cannot read Who was this inspiration?
Sorrow made a mystery - Who drizzled on this ancient debris? Was it you, or was it me? Too sorry to admit Makes a mystery.
-Fishy <')))><{
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Sept 28, 2008 12:08:16 GMT -5
Post by b√αиk on Sept 28, 2008 12:08:16 GMT -5
I love your guys poems they are a-mazing. I love the motion. I don't really post mine as I make them up in my head. (i think a lot) and then i forget them. LOL so keep up the good work guys.
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Sept 29, 2008 17:48:13 GMT -5
Post by S!LVER {not posting for now} on Sept 29, 2008 17:48:13 GMT -5
Ooh, I can already tell this will be a good one! Is it gonna be about the army? lol
Hmm... I'm not the best, I'm not even good... X3 but here's one of my poems... *grits teeth in embaressment of horrible poem and types*
Silver Bells
At night, when all are asleep You may want to take a peek To lay on the blue-green lawn, And look up, just before dawn To see beautiful, shining, Shimmering bells. Each of these bells are unique. Every one is different, one-of-a-kind, Some are really hard to find. They're hung on a dark ribbon high, A ribbon that is the night sky. One bell sparkles like jewls, A beautiful pearl, above all it rules. Ah, but alas, the ruby is rising The ribbon that was dark and blue Is now an entierley different hue For the sun is rising high, Time for the stars and moon to say, "Goodbye!"
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Moonzzz
Cotton Candy
People who dont know me think i am quiet, people who do wish i was[D3v:moonshade20]
Posts: 365
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Sept 29, 2008 20:44:53 GMT -5
Post by Moonzzz on Sept 29, 2008 20:44:53 GMT -5
=D that was good silver!!! oh and glad to have you "back" !!!!!!!!!!! i loved your poem skipy!!!!! When you lose a friend------ Everything is bright, Everything is perfect. no bad in sight, but then things happen that you dont expect. They all spreaded their wings leaving me here. i saw what hate brings, like my tear. so as you can see they have left me. my sisters; i loved them. but the sisterhood, seems liek it is done. i just want to scream and cry i want their shoulders back i want to just die i never ment to do that i have always tried to make them understand but now i dont know if i can if we can be friends again, they ask how? oh jesus my lord i beg for your light i hate the path i walk toward i cant even put up a fight oh god what has happened? did you do this to make things less sad when i have to leave? ??Is this a sign? Will i actually have to leave or resign? moving from this place on to another chace help me jesus my wonder never ceases. Will i get them back or will i remain in dark and black? my anger, so hard to tame? life is so precious dont let them go you can cause a big mess whatever happenens always know friends are always there they will keep your hand but dont you dare let go and try to stand it wont work you will always need them you will feel liek a dork when you lose your friend. ooc" true story for me..right now....
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Sept 30, 2008 14:48:44 GMT -5
Post by rainbow-FiSHY on Sept 30, 2008 14:48:44 GMT -5
Oh! You guysies are all so good! Better than me, in my opinion xD. I don't usually do haikus, but lemme try this one out...(I do the first thing that pops in my head, which is why some of my poems suck xD)
Stream Silver ripples shine Under the gleaming sunlight In the running stream
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