Post by b√αиk on Jul 25, 2008 12:13:41 GMT -5
r a v e n s t a r
"cause an empty room can be so loud
its too many tears to drown them out"
"cause an empty room can be so loud
its too many tears to drown them out"
Age[/blockquote]
» Twenty-eight moons
Gender
» Tom
Clan
» Windclan
Rank
» Leader
Exterior.
[/color][/center]Summary
» Though not the most handsome cat out of the clan he still shines with his raven black pelt. He is completely pitch black and it's quite easy for him to sneak up in the dark or on any occasion. His short-hair, makes him cold a bit in leaf-bare but he manages as it's not to short.
» Compared to a regular cat you would think he was a apprentice. But really this only gives Ravenwing a advantage in fights since it makes him swift and helps him with dodging. Most cats think of his small size as a weakness but really they don't want to admit it helps him become a great warrior. Along with his small size is four thin legs along with small paws to complement along with his size. His tail to his short but still seems long compared to the tom's body. Ravenwing is quite thin although most think it's cause he doesn't eat much he actually does. Ravenwing can be known chowing down on twice the freskill more than a cat twice his size. But he always works hard and hunts enough to eat that much. Along with his slim figure Ravenwing has lean and hard muscles that ripple under his coat in the sun. Being a Windclan cat this isn't unusual but still makes him look more deadly.
» Deep sea blue eyes are always plastered upon the tom's small face. Most think the eyes make him look handsome, some think it makes him look mysterious and some just think it makes him look evil. Whatever they think it's all true. His eyes do make him look handsome. But in battle they make him look evil. They do also make him look mysterious cause of the way he doesn't talk much. But that's up to you to decide.
Pelt
» Short-haired with pitch black raven colored pelt.
Eye
» Deep sea blue colored pearls.
Body
» Lean muscular small body with small tail, paw, and legs to compliment it.
Special
» long scratch along belly along with a x scar on his right side flank.
Interior.
[/color][/center]Summary
» Some would say " Oh he's just a shy mite." Though most cats thought this and believed this was true, it wasn't. Ravenwing just didn't talk much. The tom never felt like talking. If you talked to a cat from a while back who knew Ravenwing as a kit, apprentice, or even a newly made warrior they would all tell you he was a chatty happy cat whom everyone in the clan loved to be around. everyone respected him and listened to him until the day tragedy struck after that most cats tried to comfort Ravenwing but he ignored them. Simply going off on his own and speaking only when needed. He put his mind in to being the best warrior he could be after all what else did he have to live for? The tom would simply eat alone hunt alone or even sleep alone. Not cat knows how to comfort him or help him feel better. Indeed he didn't talk much but you couldn't find a more loyal cat then Ravenwing. Always putting other cats and the clan before himself. The tom is well respected and most cats feel comforted when he is around as if he could guard them if danger lurked. But being respected does mean everything, he still doesn't talk much but he is one of the most kindest and gentlest cats around as he thinks before going in to battle. Ravenwing is often caught staring at kits playing and most wonder if he isn't to bad after all.
Positive
» Kind
» Loyal
» Peaceful
» Leadership [calm in bad situations]
Negative
» Not talkative
» Lonely
» Out of it [not noticing some things]
» Doesn't know how to have fun
Likes and Dislikes
» likes
.kits
.sun bathing
.wind
.running
.hunting
.training
.teaching
.learning
.helping
» dislikes
.annoying cats
.non-loyal cats
.adders
.water
.thorns
.getting sick
.being bossed around
.bossy cats
History.
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» kit
It happened as a bad love story. The two families didn't approve of the love going between the two. But this was different. It was breaking the warrior code. Silversong, a beautiful she-cat and loyal to was one of the best cats in Windclan. At a gathering it seemed odd that Silversong had hit it off with a night black tom from Riverclan. The tom's name Nightwing. Nobody suspected loyal Silversong would fall for the blood thirsty Nightwing. Nightwing was the the deputy of Riverclan. He wanted to be leader and most cats didn't know all they knew was it was bad to get in to a fight with him. Silversong thought she could get thorough the cold side of Nightwing. Soon they began meeting each other at night until Silversong's belly started growing. Nightwing was furious but stayed for the sake of creating his legacy. Silversong birthed her kits.
She had four kits. One died at birth but Silversong was glad that at least some had lived. Nightwing told her he loved her and that he would be back. He didn't return he decided not to tell his clan mates simply saying he had chased a dog of there territory. Silver song huddled her three remaining kits together. The runt of the litter seemed as if he would be gone soon but he wasn't. A small black raven colored tom he was. Born along with him where two she-cats. Both healthy and tall, one was a white and brown spotted she-cat well the other was a mottled brown one. Silversong named the tom Ravenkit, and the other two Patchkit and Eaglekit.
Soon they returned to Windclan. Everyone looked down on Silversong for her foolish love. Ravekit never really bothered to think he didn't have a father, he didn't care his mother was nice enough. Silversong stayed in the nursery along with another queen and her two kits. Maskedkit and Yarrowkit, Yarrowkit seemed unhealthy and soon died from green-cough along. Not knowing that Patchkit had it they all stayed with her sharing meat as they got older. Silversong was surprised Ravenkit was living. Soon though the green cough showed and Patchkit died. Silversong mourned the loss of her favorite kit not letting the other kits knowing she favored Patchkit. Silversong watched her kits with eyes like a hawk not letting them do anything that might put them in danger. Maskedkit soon became fond of Ravenkit but they didn't say or do much.
» apprentice
Soon Ravenkit, Maskedkit, and Eaglekit where apprenticed. Ravenkit now Ravenpaw was excited to finally start training. His mentor Heatherfur turned out to be quite the harsh mentor. Ravenpaw tried his best to please his mentor as a compliment from her was, it was okay. Deep inside Heatherfur adored her apprentice and taught him everything she knew. Heatherfur taught him about borders and fighting teaching him everything she knew. Soon Ravenpaw thought he wasn't training well because of the way Heatherfur didn't show any appreciation. Ravenpaw tried his hardest when battle training with Eaglepaw. But Heatherfur still didn't open up.
One night Ravenpaw woke up because he couldn't sleep going in to the clearing he saw Heatherfur leaving. Deciding to follow her he kept downwind and slowly followed his mentor suspicious about what she was doing. Soon he noticed Heatherfur go in to a bramble bush. Sneaking in to one near it Ravenpaw stayed silent. Soon a dark brown tom sneaked in to it to. Ravenpaw sniffed and noticed he had no scent. Only that he looked like a rouge. Ravenpaw watched as Heatherfur purred with delight. He had never seen her so happy. Ravenpaw went back to camp not knowing what to do. Should he tell the clan leader or should he leave Heatherfur along. She had looked so happy.
In the morning Ravenpaw woke to go on his assessment. Trying to push away the fact that Heatherfur was keeping a secret from the clan. But it showed to clearly as Ravenpaw couldn't catch a squirrel that was practically in his paws. Heatherfur stepped out from where she had been watching him and confronted him angrily that he seemed out of it. Ravenpaw finally let it all out telling Heatherfur everything he had seen last night. Heatherfur was angry at him but then quickly calmed down. She explained that the rouge was her father and that she barely got to seem him. Ravenpaw nodded knowing how she felt. Soon he was back on his assessment returning with A crow and a squirrel to camp. Ravenpaw had passed so had his sister and Maskedpaw who he was growing more and more fond of.
» warrior
During Ravenpaw's ceremony a wing fluttered down from a raven. The leader immediately smiled and named the tom Ravenwing. Maskedpaw was name Maskedheart, and Eaglepaw was name Eaglesong. Soon it was clear that Maskedheart and Ravenwing where in love. They where always caught together. Eaglesong soon turned jealous as she was used to having her brother to herself. Ravenwing tried to hang out with both but it was so hard. Eaglesong soon started to ignore him completely. Not caring about where or who he was with. To add to all the drama Silversong had passed away in her sleep. Ravenwing and Eaglesong sat vigil but never once spoke a word to each other after.
Soon Ravenwing got his first apprentice, Flightpaw a petite small grey she-cat. The tom tried to be-friend the apprentice and it worked. He was nice and complimented her on every good thing she did. He showed her what she did wrong rather then yelling at her. They would sometimes be found just talking about things, as Flightpaw didn't know her mother like Ravenwing didn't know his dad. They would often hunt together and Ravenwing spent all the time he could with her. Flightpaw was the joy of his day along with Maskedheart. He took her battle training with Maskedhearts' apprentice, Yellowpaw. Ravenwing taught her everything her knew. When it was time for Flightpaw to be made a warrior he stood tall and proud like it was his own kit. Flightpaw was named Flightbird and soon became one of the best warriors in the clan.
There hadn't been much peace with Riverclan lately and soon Riverclan attacked there camp. Ravenwing fought like a Tigerclan cat. Driving back cats twice his size. Ravenwing spotted Maskedheart struggling under the weight or Riverclan's deputy Nightwing. Ravenwing launched himself at the deputy as he watched Maskedheart lay there breathing ever so slightly. Fighting with all his might Ravenwing tried to pin the massive tom but it only ended up with Nightwing pinning him down. Nightwing gave Ravenwing a evil smile and asked why he was fighting his dad. Ravenwing stared astonished, so Nightwing was his father the evil cat who was hungry for leadership. Ravenwing wiggled under his grasp trying to get free as Nigthwing raised a paw to finished Ravenwing. A small lithe grey body ran in to Nightwing lifting his weight off of Ravenwing just seconds before he would have killed him. Ravenwing struggled up ward and he stared as Flightbird and Nightwing writhed in a ball. Ravenwing stared horrified as they rolled to a cliff that dropped down in to the lake. Ravenwing leaped to his paws. Reaching them as they where about to roll of the cliff Ravenwing stretched forward try to catch Flightbird by the scruff but it was to late. They crashed toward the water. Both bodies going limp. Ravenwing leaped off the cliff in to the water. Going under he struggled to get up for breath. As he reached the surface he pawed the water searching around he saw Flightbird's grey body. Swimming towards it he grabbed her by the scruff and swam towards the shore. Reaching it he started licking her fur to get her body warm. Flightbird gave a shiver. Her light blue eyes looked up in to Ravenwing's. Giving one last mew her grey body gave a shudder before falling still. Ravenwing sat there dripping wet watching as his former apprentice went to starclan.
Eaglesong was the first to find Ravenwing. She pushed her maw into Ravenwing's as if they had never stopped talking with each other. She started licking her brother's fur the wrong way as she tried to keep him warm. Gently he guided the lost tom up towards the camp. When they reached it many cats complimented Ravenwing at his good fighting and mourned about Flightbird. Ravenwing sat vigil. Afterward he went to the warrior den with Eaglesong close beside him. As they curled up the rise and fall of her body comforted Ravenwing. Ravenwing slept till sunhigh. When he awoke he got out and stretched. looking to his sister he asked where Maskedheart was. Eaglesong stared at her paws. Ravenwing's eyes grew wide and he felt tears sliding down. Leaving the camp to go for a walk Ravenwing felt anger burn up in him. His father had killed the two cats he had cared for the most. Looking up at the sky Ravenwing swore for revenge but soon learned his father had drowned. Ravenwing soon felt comfort with Eaglesong as he grew close to his sister. But he rarely talked even to her.
Ravenwing put his mind to being the best cat he could be. He dreamed of becoming the deputy as she struggled to find something to live for. Every cat respected him but felt cold when near the tom who barley spoke. Most cats stopped speaking to him. Ravenwing tried his best to put his mind to being a great warrior. Brining back loads of prey. Eaglesong tried with her might to comfort the tom but he felt so distant like never before. She felt like she couldn't reach him. She gave up and simply let Ravenwing do what he wanted but still tried to help him. Ravenwing became duller and duller by the days, not looking forward to anything. He felt no love, he felt like he didn't know what fun was. And that's where his story ends. And begins here!
Birth
» His mother Silversong of Windclan, and his father Nightwing of Riverclan. He had three sisters but one died at birth. The other two Eaglekit and Patchkit. Patchkit to died later of greencough Now it's only Ravenwing and Eaglesong who carry Silversong's legacy.
Dreams
» To become deputy
Other.
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Codeword
» "I love the world"
Author's note
» So Sorry! I had a lot of muse! Hope it's not to ramble ish and bad.
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