Moonzzz
Cotton Candy
People who dont know me think i am quiet, people who do wish i was[D3v:moonshade20]
Posts: 365
|
Post by Moonzzz on Jun 30, 2008 15:59:05 GMT -5
I have mentioned a book that i have written. some people want to hear it so first i will tell you the main characters. This book also has a lot to do with my personal life so i am cutting out a lot of parts. Main characters: Moonshade: Riverclan-main main character Sqirrelface: Shadowclan-Moonshades best friend Dotclaw: Thunderclan-Moonshades friend Brightflower: Thunderclan-Moonshades cousin Firestorm: Thunderclan-Brightflowers mate Silverheart: Thunderclan- friend of all cats, especially Spottedleaf Dappleleaf: Thunderclan- Silverstreams friend
Now i will give you all of the clans and their leaders, deputy's, med-cats, warriors, and app of med-cats.
Riverclan
Leader- none Deputy-Brakenheart Med-cat- Fernfrost, app: Chickenpaw Warriors- Grayflower, Moonshade, Tallstripe, Brightleaf, Splotchfur, Bluestone, Cloudfur, Snowflake, Dustfeather, Rainbowwing, Roseheart.
Thunderclan Leader-none Deputy-Squirrelfur Med-cat- none Warriors- Snowbird, Sorrelface, Whitewing, Sarah, Brambleear, Cloudpelt, Dotclaw.
Shadowclan Leader- Darkstar Deputy-Blackwing Med-cat- Connfetti, app-Strippedpaw Warriors- Squirrelface, Bloodclaw, Nightwing, Flowerfrost, Wildmask, Longpelt, Twitches
Windclan Leader-Swiftstar Deputy- Rainfur Med-cat- Dustfur, app- Sunpaw Warriors- Rabbitwind, Pebbleheart, Weedfoot, Roosterfoot, Brownfur, Whiteflower
As you can see, these clans are need. Whether they need leaders or deputy or both. They may need more warriors. Maybe they need medicine cats. Whatever the need, Starclan has chosen many twolegs whom have read the warrior books and can help these clans. But first, heres the intro!
Intro Moonshades view I walked along the gravely path. The sun beaming on me. The wind rustling the trees. Wait, was that an animal in those bushes, i thought. A gray cat appeared from the bush speckled with glistening red berries."Here kitty kitty kitty!" i said a loud. " My name is Grayflower." I jumped in surprise, " Did you just tal....." I was interrupted by the impatient she-cat, " Yes, of course i talked. What was Swiftstar talking about, she couldn't of possibly thought that you Two-legs were smart enough...." "hey!" I now interrupting," I am smart! Its just that I'm not used to talking animals." The cat sighed,"Please, the five clans need you. we are losing cats. Starclan has sent me and other cats to find you and the other chosen ones." I was extremely confused. Were those books written by Erin Hunter really non-fiction? "Just come to the row of dead trees behind your house and i will explain later." The gray cat strutted back through the berry bush. A bird was chirping. I was going to go. I had no idea what was up next, and if i had, i probably wouldn't have gone.
;O tell me if you want the chapters to begin
|
|
Moonzzz
Cotton Candy
People who dont know me think i am quiet, people who do wish i was[D3v:moonshade20]
Posts: 365
|
Post by Moonzzz on Aug 3, 2008 20:21:16 GMT -5
please note that alot of this book shows my emotions for whatever time i wrote the certain chapter, so i have modified it a lot. Please tel me what you think every time i write a chapter.
Chapter 1 in Moonshade's view I looked around. "So this is Riverclan camp." i meowed in intrest. the camp was spacious. it was protected by a stream that ran around the camp. the entrance was small, and not to mention wet. on the far right of the entrance was apprentice den. the cold looking den had small cats in front of it eating. Right across from entrance was a large rock, above it was a dark empty den. 'the leaders den' i thought. to the left of the rock was a tree, under it was an old cat taking a nap. it was obviously the elders den. Right next to it was a den that was almost split a part. i could tell it was the medicine cat den by the rich smells of herbs drifting from it. to the right of the rock was obviously the warriors den, it was the largest of all dens. i could see a bush of to the side of the warriors den. suddenly a cat slid from under the bush, the she-cat shook the leaves from her pelt. i padded curiously toward the bush, suddenly a black and white cat who seemed old enough to be an apprentice popped from the bush. i stopped her. " young one, who are you?" the cat gave me a look like i was crazy. " im nightpaw, and i should be the one asking you who YOU are." ' oh' i thought, ' she is an apprentice." i gave her a confident look. " well i am moonshade. i was sent here by Grayflower." my mind raced back to the fateful day when i put my foot out the door of my warm, NORMAL, house. my mom, of course, thought i was going on a mission with the church to Atlanta. when i met Grayflower in the trees she had told me and my friends to sleep under a certain tree and we would become cats. We all began laughing, but the cats kept a strait face. i remeber a cat with wild colors all over her face, Wildmask, saying, " us warriors dont joke when we are serious." it had shaken me to hear this. " i was wondering were that bush led." the cat was obvoiusly holding back a laugh, " well, there is a hole under the bush. you go through the hole down to a huge cavern. it is the nursery." 'well that seddles that' i thought. in the middle of the camp was a large willow tree. its leaves drooped down. i could see a little hole were one of the roots stuck out. i saw a fish fin coming from it. out of no were a young tom cats voice meowed excitedly, " hey moonshade you want to try fish, it is really good!" i turned to see a golden brown cat looking at me. " um and you would be..." almost instantly he answered, " oh, Brakenheart!" i gave him a look and said " fish raw! that is disgusting." he hesitate. " well, you never know till you try it." i shrugged and took a bite of the fish in front of me. A burst of flavor flooded my mouth. " It is great," i exclaimed. " i know aint it?" he meowed.
to be countinued.......
|
|
Moonzzz
Cotton Candy
People who dont know me think i am quiet, people who do wish i was[D3v:moonshade20]
Posts: 365
|
Post by Moonzzz on Aug 9, 2008 18:09:30 GMT -5
Chapter 2 In Squirrelface's veiw I climbed the tree that made Shadowclan camp. I jumped down into the shadowy camp. I looked over to my far left. The highrock was there, and leader's den close. Across the leader's den was a very wide tree trunk, with a hole in it. i padded up to it, i heard cats telling storys and excited sqeaks, 'elder's den' i thought. next to the elder's den was a large den made of tangled roots, dried up mud, and some moss. a waft of warm milky smelling air floated toward me. 'the nursery' the, across from the entrance was a tree, but its branches were almost tied to the grounf. i smelled a tangy scent coming from it. 'most defiantly the medicine cat den. Left of the medicine cat den was a smaller den, so i guessed it was the apprentice den. The left of the apprentice den was last but not least, the warriors den. the camp was dark. that was becuase of the pine trees hanging over the camp. "It is so, perfect!" i rejoiced. "i know" came a meow from behind me. i turned. i cat with large black wings stood behind me. "im blackwing. I am the Deputy. have you ever tasted blackbird?" he meowed. i shook my head, "no" "well then," he meowed pushing a limp black body towards me, "try it!" i curled my nose at the stinky peice of food, "alright." i mewed reluctantly. i took a bite, "this is the best thing i have ever tasted!" she meowed with pleasure. "would you like to come on a patrol with me?" Blackwing meowed. "alright" i meowed. that would be exciting! 'i wonder how dotclaw, fire...., silverstream, spottedleaf and Brightflower are doing in their new clan?' i wondered..... To be Continued!
|
|
ogrins
Caramel
what shall you die for?
Posts: 179
|
Post by ogrins on Aug 10, 2008 8:14:12 GMT -5
whoa, this is sweet! i love the idea of morphing into a cat! its a little confusing at times, but its really nice, and has a great plot! keep 'em coming!
|
|
Moonzzz
Cotton Candy
People who dont know me think i am quiet, people who do wish i was[D3v:moonshade20]
Posts: 365
|
Post by Moonzzz on Aug 10, 2008 10:04:12 GMT -5
ooc: thank you! Chapter 3 Dotclaw I walked into the steep ravine, Right behind fireheart and silverstream. Spottedleaf kept on my heels. The steep ravine made Thunderclan's entrance. I purred when i felt the warm breeze ripple through my fur. looking to my right i saw the highrock, Fireheart stared at the den under it. Obviously the leader's den since it was only big enough to fit possibly two poeple! Further right was a split rock. a thick scent drifted from the rocks, making my nose twitch. i had to turn my head around, the scent was so strong. silvertream looked at the den in intrest, and Spottedleaf was defiantly anxious to go in! On my left was the apprentice den. The small cats were sprawled out on the stump in front of the hole. enjoying the sun. Farther left, past the apprentice den, Was the Warriors den. i Could smell different scents drifting from the den. It was large. And a tiny bit to the left of the Warrior's den was the nursery. What looked like a ball of Brambles had milky sweet scents coming from it. It gave me a Warm Tingly feeling. kits high pitched mews sounded from the den. Next to the nursery, but fartther back into the forest, was the elders den. cats chanted on about lionclan and tigerclan. i tilted my head, wondering what a "lionclan" was. "So i guess i sleep in the warriors den?" i meowed "We all do" Fireheart meowed. "Dont get too bossy yet" Silverstream laughed "Cool it silverstream. He didnt do anything wrong... Besides, He probably will become leader!" Brightflower replied. a type of affection came from her voice. i just rolled my eyes when i saw firehearts tail shoot straight up. "Well hello there." a voice came from behind. I shot my head around to see a Golden colored cat. "i am Squirrelflight. I am the deputy of Thunderclan. When our leader died, Starclan sent me a sign telling me that i shall pick the next leader and medicine cat." She looked around. She was thoroghly annoyed. "so i suggest stop acting like twolegs and be on your best behavior!" With that, The cat turned and padded off, tail drooping. "She must have wanted to be leader," Spottedleaf mrowed, "Deputys are supposed to become leaders.." I nodded my agreement. it wasnt important to me though, like i want to become leader. Its too much work..... a voice came from behind us once again, "Is anybody hungry." As if we were planning it, we all meowed, "YES!" "Okay okay! you must be the twolegs Squirrelflight was speaking about, im Sorreltail." She pushed a limp body toward us, "its mouse, Try some." my belly grumbled, but i still had some common sence! "Is that, Raw?" Fireheart looked at me annoyed. "Of course it is Dotclaw, They dont start campfires, Stick the mouse on a stick and roast it.." i looked at him confused, "They dont?" Now everyone looked at me funny. "Err no Dotclaw. Just try it." Sorreltail meowed. We all took a bite from the mouse. A wonderful taste flooded my mouth! This was going to be fun after all! To be Continued........
|
|