Post by harrald on Mar 14, 2008 21:18:08 GMT -5
I'm using my leader bio, Coralstar, from another site. So I brought up the original bio. Tell me if you'd like it to be moved to your bio format.
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Name: Coralstar
Rank: Leader
Lives: 6
Clan: WindClan
Gender: She-cat
Age: 89 moons
Physical Appearance: Coralstar is a majestic pale cream she-cat with gorgeous stripes of a slightly darker cream color, and spots of the same color as the stripes. Her lithe body may seem small and vulnerable, but she has a hidden strength that will amaze and impress the finest of warriors. Her tail is small, but looks long and flowing by its thin, bony size. Her ears are tall, but average in their width. They are always pricked up, patiently listening for any sound as to a threatening danger. Her paws are average size compared to most cats, but her legs are so scrawny that they seem large. Her skin seems to fit too small for her, and she is always looking tiny and thin. Her snow-white whiskers are a sight to see. They are long, and flow like snowy fur on an angel cat. Her stripes and spots stop about half-way down her delicate legs, leaving pale cream fur. She has many battle scars.
Coralstar's eyes are a soft, earthy green that can make even the coldest of hearts warm. They are like a bright olive-green-and-leaf mix. Her muzzle is longer than most cats, and is a white, with a tint of cream. It is like a cotton-ball resting on the end of a stick. Her lithe body has a very slight bone structure and a petite-looking muscular build. But she is one of the toughest cats of all WindClan.
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Personality: Coralstar is the kindest, sweetest cat you will ever meet. She is always happy and excited. Kits thrill her, queens always get special treatment, and warriors are always loved and welcome. Coralstar's soft green gaze is like a feather coming to rest upon you. Your heart will melt, and you will never stop purring with joy. She is equally kind and caring to each cat the same, and has never loved. She believes love gets in the way of leadership. She always has great advice, and is always the favorite to talk with or be around.
Coralstar might seem all kind and loving at first glance. But she is the best leader the Clan could ask for. She cares a lot, but also makes a just and fair leader. If a cat disobeys StarClan, she will carry out a fitting punishment. If a cat does something wrong be accident, or is accused of something without proof, she will prove fair. She will always make sure the truth is found, and will listen to both sides.
History: Born of Moonracer and Tigermoon, she was originally named Moonkit. But the name did not fit, and when the cats were asked of her name, they pondered briefly.
"I think, Coralkit." And Coralkit it was. Her pelt was the golden-pink color of ocean coral, and her pelt was striped like the waving stalks of the under-sea plant. Coralkit was always playful and mischievous. She got into trouble much more than once, and was always disappearing from camp. She seemed the unlikely candidate for the leadership position.
As an apprentice, Coralpaw was very eager to learn. She listened intently to her mentor, and was a perfectionist. She trained hard with her mentor, Tigerfur. Soon she had learned how to hunt, fight, and do any warrior task properly. Coralpaw is the best apprentice of all the Clan. They began to notice her leadership skill and talent. Her favorite thing was to fight. She would try clever tricks to trip and pin Tigerfur.
Coralpaw's mother and father willed her the name Coralmoon. But StarClan had another thought. Coralpelt, was the chosen name. Coralpelt was an amazing warrior. With every battle, she grew stronger, faster, and wiser. She defeated many cats, and obtained many battle scars. But the most noticeable was a large slash down her right side. It left a scar extremely horrid, and the fur never grew back around the area. She tried hard to impress the leaders and deputies, even with her many scars. But nothing ever worked.
One day, her brother, Moonheart, was elected deputy. He noticed his sister's great talent, but feared how he would be viewed if he selected his sister as deputy once he became leader. Instead he selected Ebonytail. When she became leader, she elected Coralpelt as deputy. Coralpelt's brother had helped Ebonytail notice the raw talent Coralpelt possessed, and had almost made the decision for her.
Coralstar went through two lives in great battles, but the grandest took her third (see RP below).
Role Play Example: Coralstar leaped into action. The devious ShadowClan was at it again, trying to steal more territory. Coralstar had just heard the screech of cats, and had bounded out of her cozy den in the Highrock. Suddenly, battle could be felt from anywhere. Coralstar felt her paws leave the sandy earth as she jumped at the first intruder. She knocked him off his feet, and he darted out of the camp in terror. Two, three, four cats gone. Five, six. Then Coralstar spotted her prey. The leader, Darkstar, was battling an apprentice and her mentor. Coralstar knocked Darkstar off balance, and had him pinned in an instant. But she felt the power of his thrust, and was sent sprawling back. She had counted the number of lives he had lost down to three left, and was trying to make it two.
Coralstar felt the piercing of dagger-like claws in her fur. She winced at the pain it caused, and tried to throw him back. But he was to heavy, and much to strong. She felt life oozing out of her.
"N-O-O-O-O." she mumbled, but it was to late. Suddenly she felt herself fade into nothingness. StarClan stood in front of her. She had died before, and knew she just had to wait. She watched the battle with a sad heart.
Darkstar walked away from Coralstar's body, as soon as she had come back. She leaped up, twirled to face him, and lunged. Her teeth met flesh, and she suddenly tasted the unsavory blood of a rival cat. She stood as the body went limp, preparing to attack as he woke. But he didn't. Soon several other ShadowClan cats noticed their still leader. Finally, one spoke up.
"Darkstar is dead!" Coralstar was confused, though she finally began to understand. He had been on his last life. Coralstar felt suddenly weak, as she collapsed onto the bare, blood-stained earth, and remained silent.
Number of Cat: 1st
Other: Coralkit - Coralpaw - Coralpelt - Coralstar
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Coralstar had two siblings, a brother and a sister. Her brother was named Moonheart, and her sister, Silvermoon.
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Name: Coralstar
Rank: Leader
Lives: 6
Clan: WindClan
Gender: She-cat
Age: 89 moons
Physical Appearance: Coralstar is a majestic pale cream she-cat with gorgeous stripes of a slightly darker cream color, and spots of the same color as the stripes. Her lithe body may seem small and vulnerable, but she has a hidden strength that will amaze and impress the finest of warriors. Her tail is small, but looks long and flowing by its thin, bony size. Her ears are tall, but average in their width. They are always pricked up, patiently listening for any sound as to a threatening danger. Her paws are average size compared to most cats, but her legs are so scrawny that they seem large. Her skin seems to fit too small for her, and she is always looking tiny and thin. Her snow-white whiskers are a sight to see. They are long, and flow like snowy fur on an angel cat. Her stripes and spots stop about half-way down her delicate legs, leaving pale cream fur. She has many battle scars.
Coralstar's eyes are a soft, earthy green that can make even the coldest of hearts warm. They are like a bright olive-green-and-leaf mix. Her muzzle is longer than most cats, and is a white, with a tint of cream. It is like a cotton-ball resting on the end of a stick. Her lithe body has a very slight bone structure and a petite-looking muscular build. But she is one of the toughest cats of all WindClan.
Picture:
Personality: Coralstar is the kindest, sweetest cat you will ever meet. She is always happy and excited. Kits thrill her, queens always get special treatment, and warriors are always loved and welcome. Coralstar's soft green gaze is like a feather coming to rest upon you. Your heart will melt, and you will never stop purring with joy. She is equally kind and caring to each cat the same, and has never loved. She believes love gets in the way of leadership. She always has great advice, and is always the favorite to talk with or be around.
Coralstar might seem all kind and loving at first glance. But she is the best leader the Clan could ask for. She cares a lot, but also makes a just and fair leader. If a cat disobeys StarClan, she will carry out a fitting punishment. If a cat does something wrong be accident, or is accused of something without proof, she will prove fair. She will always make sure the truth is found, and will listen to both sides.
History: Born of Moonracer and Tigermoon, she was originally named Moonkit. But the name did not fit, and when the cats were asked of her name, they pondered briefly.
"I think, Coralkit." And Coralkit it was. Her pelt was the golden-pink color of ocean coral, and her pelt was striped like the waving stalks of the under-sea plant. Coralkit was always playful and mischievous. She got into trouble much more than once, and was always disappearing from camp. She seemed the unlikely candidate for the leadership position.
As an apprentice, Coralpaw was very eager to learn. She listened intently to her mentor, and was a perfectionist. She trained hard with her mentor, Tigerfur. Soon she had learned how to hunt, fight, and do any warrior task properly. Coralpaw is the best apprentice of all the Clan. They began to notice her leadership skill and talent. Her favorite thing was to fight. She would try clever tricks to trip and pin Tigerfur.
Coralpaw's mother and father willed her the name Coralmoon. But StarClan had another thought. Coralpelt, was the chosen name. Coralpelt was an amazing warrior. With every battle, she grew stronger, faster, and wiser. She defeated many cats, and obtained many battle scars. But the most noticeable was a large slash down her right side. It left a scar extremely horrid, and the fur never grew back around the area. She tried hard to impress the leaders and deputies, even with her many scars. But nothing ever worked.
One day, her brother, Moonheart, was elected deputy. He noticed his sister's great talent, but feared how he would be viewed if he selected his sister as deputy once he became leader. Instead he selected Ebonytail. When she became leader, she elected Coralpelt as deputy. Coralpelt's brother had helped Ebonytail notice the raw talent Coralpelt possessed, and had almost made the decision for her.
Coralstar went through two lives in great battles, but the grandest took her third (see RP below).
Role Play Example: Coralstar leaped into action. The devious ShadowClan was at it again, trying to steal more territory. Coralstar had just heard the screech of cats, and had bounded out of her cozy den in the Highrock. Suddenly, battle could be felt from anywhere. Coralstar felt her paws leave the sandy earth as she jumped at the first intruder. She knocked him off his feet, and he darted out of the camp in terror. Two, three, four cats gone. Five, six. Then Coralstar spotted her prey. The leader, Darkstar, was battling an apprentice and her mentor. Coralstar knocked Darkstar off balance, and had him pinned in an instant. But she felt the power of his thrust, and was sent sprawling back. She had counted the number of lives he had lost down to three left, and was trying to make it two.
Coralstar felt the piercing of dagger-like claws in her fur. She winced at the pain it caused, and tried to throw him back. But he was to heavy, and much to strong. She felt life oozing out of her.
"N-O-O-O-O." she mumbled, but it was to late. Suddenly she felt herself fade into nothingness. StarClan stood in front of her. She had died before, and knew she just had to wait. She watched the battle with a sad heart.
Darkstar walked away from Coralstar's body, as soon as she had come back. She leaped up, twirled to face him, and lunged. Her teeth met flesh, and she suddenly tasted the unsavory blood of a rival cat. She stood as the body went limp, preparing to attack as he woke. But he didn't. Soon several other ShadowClan cats noticed their still leader. Finally, one spoke up.
"Darkstar is dead!" Coralstar was confused, though she finally began to understand. He had been on his last life. Coralstar felt suddenly weak, as she collapsed onto the bare, blood-stained earth, and remained silent.
Number of Cat: 1st
Other: Coralkit - Coralpaw - Coralpelt - Coralstar
````````````````(almost Coralmoon)
Coralstar had two siblings, a brother and a sister. Her brother was named Moonheart, and her sister, Silvermoon.
