discussion--plot

[night]

And, of course, maybe we should have some prose thoguhts and prayers since, I mena, this cat may be having an inspirational near-death experience which opens the floodegates of their soul...but still, they also have license to keep thinking...anyway, I'll try to get a few more verse things.

[Moony™]

Ah, yeah.
We need a Starclan's prayer.
Inspirational near-death experience... which can open the floodgates...
Awesome wording. =)

It's not long, anyways.

And--
((Crap, school, I'll write my thoughts after school.))

[night]

Warrior: Starclan, fi you have the power,
save us from [either 'this mess of flowers' or 'this cursed flower'.]
do not let my family die,
too many cats already lie
slain here, please my clanmates save,
and let better flowers cover my grave. [Anything but this stupid belladonna, in other words!]

Starclan: Warrior, if the clans will band
together, they can save this land.
But they'll be crossed by those that feed
upon this all-destroying weed.
Alll who do this flower taste [XP...]
shall soon go mad, away shall waste. [XP XP XP!!]

Warrior: But, ho Starclan, it is good;
or it could be if we cats would
use it but for medicinge,
and many clanmates' live s we'd win.

Starclan: Warrior, they must touch it not.
It's for this reason that you've fought.
For all the good that it may do,
it threatens to kill all of you.
Now must you come to our starry home [X'C]
and from now on the stars you'll roam.

[Moony™]

Ooh! I LOVE the part where it says:
"If you have the power", on the 1st verse.

I love how you put "if", I mean, Starclan really has the power and I bet they're going to say "yes!".
Smart!

[night]

Yea...not that the warrior doubts Starclan, but Starclan has said a few time sin the books, if I remember correctly, that they can't stop whatever's happening. So instead of blaming Starclan for not helping them, the warrior respects Starclan with their plea.

[Moony™]

Yeah, you put it into words better than me.
It's good, I like it. =)

[Night logged out sorry]

Hum...I posted more poem but it disappeared. Maybe it didn't successfully work.

[night logged out sorry]

Oops, nev mind, my computer just went kaput and that's why it din't show. You can delete both these posts, Moony...

[night]

Aw, thanks. And sorry about the extra posts...my computer is having some probs.

[Moony™]

That's fine with me. =)

[Moony™]

It's almost done!
I've changed the whole butterfly scheme because I think that'd be rather too long and kind of random. ^^ So I made that the Belladonna choked itself, like there were too many flowers with too less resources. Which could represent overcome by greed and power, and eventually it backfires.

Here's the table of content of all events.

{table of contents}
zero --> belladonna [info to the flower, a quick sum]
one --> prayer [the prayer in a prophecy]
two --> storm [storm coming in, carrying the seeds]
three --> seeds [the first discovery of the flower, in Windclan, where the good symptoms are found]
four --> miracle [seed spreads to every clan, more good symptoms are found]
five --> spark [flower has multiplied. It’s spreading rapidly, killing. Negative side effects are found. First death.]
six --> truth [even more negative is found. More deaths. Effects are taking place]
seven --> divide [division of who is to protect, who is not]
seven --> blame [blame is pointed to the medicine cats, leaders, and to starclan. More madness.]
eight --> war [the war between the division. Against the flower wins, the prayer is held.]
nine --> death [flower begins to die out because it was choking itself. Overcame with greed and too much power.]
ten --> gift [nature heals itself, blessed is the land]

[Bhuvana]

me likey!! Very creative Moony!

[Moony™]

Thanks Bhuvana! =)
I also couldn't have done without all the people who gave me great ideas on this thread with all the encouragements.

[Bhuvana]

Well then, i give good words to you all! This idea was very creative and I believe it is going to be quite interesting/fun as well!!

[Moony™]

Yay! Thanks Bhuvana! My gosh, I love your name, it's fun to type/say.