Tumblekit

[Moonzzz]

Tumblekit
"Im not afraid to die. I just don't want to be there when it happens."

Age
4 moons
Gender
Tom
Clan
Thunderlcan
Rank
kit

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The sight of a tumbling Water Fall.

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Summary
his muscles ripple under his young fur. small eyes still blue, destined to darken into navy. he is handsome, he is unusually strong, for his age. He has an unusualy long tail. he walks fine, so whats with the name? when his claws are unseathed, he tends to "tumble" over. he also like waterfalls. he has white fur, with grayish blue patches randomly placed on his pelt. sometimes, his fur gets so blue that cats say that the patches are from him rolling in berries. this Embarresses(sp?) him, becuase when about 2 moons old he had snuck in the medicine cat den and actually did roll in berries. but the patches are real fur.
Pelt
Tumblekit is a short haired cat. his "patchwork" is random and slightly gray/blue.
Eye
Right now, Tumblekit has kit blue eyes. Though he is Destined to have navy blue eyes
Body
Small like a kit. he is very musclear.
Special
some say his claws contain a power too worthy for him now.

The tumbles of soul.

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Summary
Tumblekit is a brave little kit. he tells his mom he is going to become clan leader some day! he knows that he isnt afraid of death. he only doesnt like the thought of how he will end, and feeling it.
when i think tumblekit i think

How I sometimes wonder,
how brave he must be,
He lays his life on the line to protect you and me.
I wish sometimes I could just understand,
Why people don’t reach out more,
or lend a hand.
Positive
Tumblekit is a fun spirit ready to help anyone he can! though it may be life threatening
helpful
nice
handsome
fun
funny
sees the bright side

Negative
He can get pretty annoying, as most kits. he will always nag and nag about becoming an apprentice
annoying
almost gets himself killed
makes life stressful


Likes and Dislikes
likes:
battle
the forest
protecting others
life
starclan
dislikes:
fish
pain
being lonely
bored

History
Future.

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Story
well i will just start with him when he becomes apprentice (this is a prediction of starclan may not come true)

tumble kit trotted around. he was going to become the best apprentice known to Thunderclan! he unseathed his claw. fogetfully he walked a couple steps and fell over. his mother walked over, "you need to learn how to keep on your feat with those claws boy." she frowned while looking st them. tumblekit knew why. his claws were large and thick. she shook her head, as if knocking herself out of it. "tumblekit" she meowed, "theres something you need to know..." the leader inturrupted her, "all cats old enough to catch their own prey gether.." 'blah blah blah" tumble kit silently mewed to himself, fast walking over toward the highrock. he was going to become an apprentice today. "Tumblekit do you...." Tumblekit nodded, "i do" he mewed. "then from this moment until you earn your warrior name you will be known as tumblepaw" at that moment. that faithful moment.
a kit met starclan
And was given a second chance

tumble kit woke. blood scent covered him. his mother pulled him close. "what happaned mom?" he mewed. his mother mewed. "you just had a bad dream"

what had happened at that moment?
tumblepaw died. and came back. the cat that killed him was his real mother. the mother of Bloodclaw.

{edit telling whats going on!?}
ok heres the thing. Tumblekit was born bye darkmist. but his dad was in thunderclan. this happened twice. the first time, tumblekit's brother, bloodclaw, was the one his mom kept. the next time was the last. tumblekit was born and was given to thunderclan to lower suspicions of a cat finding a kit twice.
Tumblekits new mom (undecided yet i will find one later) took him in, she did not know hat had happened. soon after tumblekit's real dad died of greencough.
then posibbly in the future if not stopped tumblekit will kill his mother without even knowing it.
only he can stop that terrible future. His mother was/will be the lead of a patrol who had/will supposetly found/find scent of thunderclan on their territory.
Tumblekit managed to be the first she came to attack.

Birth
He was born brave and strong
Dreams
he dreams of becoming leader

Other.

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Picture

Codeword
N/A
Author's note
If you didnt notice, he is linked to bloodclaw
he linked to bloodclaw in two ways
kin
and they both hold power in their claws (read bloodclaw's bio)

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[Moony™]

Okay okay, great bio so far--but confusing History/Future. x3

"bloodkit to you...." bloodkit nodded, "i do" he mewed. "then from this moment until you gain your warrior name you will be known as tumblekit" at that moment. that fathful moment.

This is the part that confused me the most. I lost at "Bloodkit" and "warrior name". Urm, is Bloodkit Tumblekit, why did he get a name change? Warrior name is Tumblekit?

a cat died
and came back
and killed
without even knowing it.

what had happened at that moment?
tumblekit died. and came back. the cat that killed him was his real mother. the mother of Bloodclaw.

This kinda makes sense, but still foggy. It's supernatural, he just died and came back. ^_^ well... okay.
You should clear some up of... why did his mom kill him? Mother of Bloodclaw? How is he linked to Bloodclaw? You should explain how he came back.

We can't have him completely die and come back--too... supernatural. But close enough that he saw Starclan, but since his body was really close to death, but still alive, he got a second chance. But really don't remember it except some pieces of pieces.

Also... a history is a history. How about some background info on his family? Especially mom and Bloodclaw.
And the future thing is okay. But I think how that experience changed his life is crucial. What does he know about it?

[Moonzzz]

ok im sorry. i knew some of this would be confusing!! (lol the bloodkit thing was a total mistake i was thinking about how i would end the history and how he would be linked to bloodclaw i will fix it up in a jiffy) i put the dot dot thing becuase i lost my warriors feild guide so i dont have how they do the ceremonys(and im too lazy to flip through a warriors book)
so i will fix it. he doesnt die completely. your right he ALMOST dies. i shouldve made that clearer

[Moony™]

Okay~ much better. ^-^
This is accepted--but you'll have to fix some spelling after on. Mkay? Anyways--interesting plot! =D