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Post by I v y on May 11, 2008 15:54:53 GMT -5
HarvestpawWhat in the name of StarClan?! Age 7 moons Gender She-cat Clan ThunderClan? Rank: Medicine cat Apprentice
Exterior. [/color][/center] Summery: she sees herself in a different way, like she sees everything. because of the war going on between her mind and her eyes, she thinks shes much uglier than she really is. her undercoat is a dull white... no, almost gray. over this is several other colors, mostly oranges, yellows, and some gold tint. she has a sharp muzzle and slightly rounded ears. her legs are long and thin, though shes quite small. her eyes are black, flecked messily with golden chips, but rather dull. so maybe shes not entirely beautiful; but shes good at heart, which is all that matters, really. Pelt Tabby, with tints of brown and some gold. Eye Beautiful golden-green color. Body Nice and slender. SpecialShe knows all the herbs by heart already. Interior. [/color][/center] Summery well, shes not to complicated...well, maybe she is. hes very anti-social; and is fine with that. she has an overactive imagination, and knows it. and she knows that talking about her wild mind with others only makes them thinks shes crazy; imagination is a sickness to her. she doesnt discourage her imagination though; she just holds it in until shes alone, then lets it have full reign. along with being very imaginative, shes also a bit sarcastic, and a pro at self-criticism. shes a bit...disapointed with the world, and herself. she doesnt see either of them clearly; her mind has always tried to hide it from her, and not just in a figurative sense either. she actually doesnt see things right; her version of the world is ugly and imperfect, and other cats sometimes see this. they never mention it, which is just as well. she can be a bit snappy...and is paranoid about everything. shell try and write off everything as her imagination and lack of sleep, which is reasonable; she tends to not sleep well, for lots of reasons. one is the pain; she suffers from constant headaches, and a pain in her lower jaw. she also isnt a big fan of light, and theres just too much of it lately. she likes the dim, dull world that her mind tries to create. she isnt really happy in this world; but not unhappy either. shes just learned to live with everything. Positive She would help anyone, shes a nice girl. <3 Negative She could get snappy. Likes Her Clan and her position. Dislikes Annoying cats, sometimes sunshine. History. [/color][/center] Story The moon was high on this soon-to-be bloody night. The wind was barely there, all that could be heard was the rustling of leaves as three feline-esque shapes moved through the undergrowth. One was large, her stomach sagging from the weight of full milk-sacs. She was slate gray, with small tufts of tan fur under her ears and around her chin. She looked tired, oh so very tired. The female kept looking back at the two smaller forms that struggled to keep up with her. They were her kits, a tom and a she-cat, both tiny as newborns. While they were most obviously not newborns, they couldn't be more than two or three moons. The tom was happily skipping along after her, but the female was moving at a slower pace, glancing around with narrowed eyes. It was obvious the fem was smarter than the male.
"Come, kits, we mustn't be late!" The mother called back to her kits. "Mum, where're we goin'?" The female called, prowling in circles around her brother, who obviously did not care whether there was a badger, or a fox, or something waiting out there to gobble them up. The tiny she-cat hissed into the darkness, being protective of her brother. Moonlight filtered through the leaves onto her shaggy bodice, and her magnificently bright colors could be seen with ease. Orange, red, brown, yellow, gold... it was all there. Like a cornucopia of colors, this was the kit soon to be named Harvestkit of Thunderclan, though she had no idea. "Mum, where are we going, I asked?" She turned to her mother, but she was nowhere to be found. "Mum? Brother?" Neither of her family members were anywhere to be seen. She turned round in circles, finally catching sight of her brother. "Brother! Where is mum?" But he did not reply. The tom just stood there, staring into the darkness, whiskers quivering.
Oh no... The little she-cat thought something horrible had happened. She ran past her brother and into the darkness, running through brambles, stumbling over roots. She made her way as fast as she could to her mother, following the scent of her sweet-smelling pelt. But there was a new smell, a bitter one. The sour smell of freshly-shed blood. Cat blood. She soon laid eyes upon the havoc wreaked upon her mother's body. A mangled carcass lay before her, blood spattered everywhere. And right in the middle of it, a fox. The bright orange pelt of the sly animal was splotched messily with dark shadows, most likely her mother's blood. The fox was just leaning down to grab hold of the carcass when the kit shook her head and screamed. "No! No! Nonononono! Mother!" She dashed over to stand at her mother's side, but didn't make it that far. The fox stepped into her path, maw swooping down at her. She turned and ran as fast as she could, her tiny paws not getting her too far through the woods very fast. The fox was almost upon her, and then--
"I told you!" A few Thunderclan warriors stood behind an apprentice, sniffing the air. As soon as that apprentice shouted, two took off at the fox. The fox ran, fast as he could, though the forest. The apprentice walked up to the kit and sniffed her. "Rogue." He said, turning to the warrior remaining. He nodded and sniffed around. "Three of them. Where's the others, kit?" He growled at the small she-cat. She lowered her head. "Mum's been killed by the fox. And brother..." She looked around, seeing nobody else. But she was standing on something sticky that smelled of blood. "He... he... he was k-kil..." She had to say no more. The warrior walked over and picked her up by the scruff of her neck, carrying her to camp.
The kit was taken in by a lovely queen whose kits had died of greencough. She named the lovely kit Harvestkit, and raised her as if she were her very own kit. She asked her questions galore of what her life had been like as a loner, but gradually Harvestkit lost almost all memories of even having a different life, having a different family. The queen had become her mother, the clan her family. She could not dream of another life, for this was her home, the way she wanted to live. Thunderclan was where she belonged. Birth Mother; Silvergrass Brother;Snowkit Father;Gravelfang Dreams She wishes to live a happy long life and to save and help many cats. She would like to be a Legend and wishes that no one would forget her when she dies.
Other. [/color][/center] Picture OMG! Click here! Codeword Hey, nice site! Author's note Rawr! [/size][/blockquote]
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Post by Moony™ on May 11, 2008 17:13:09 GMT -5
Awesome bio! =) Here, I edited your bio to put in the correct application. That's alright, I wasn't finished with the new application. Well, it looks beautiful! But all you need is to add is the Quote, likes/dislikes, and some of the part in the history.
Harvestpaw"quote/saying about the character" Age 7 moons Gender She-cat Clan Any Clan That needs the most cats. Rank: Medicine cat Apprentice
Exterior. [/color][/center] Summery: she sees herself in a different way, like she sees everything. because of the war going on between her mind and her eyes, she thinks shes much uglier than she really is. her undercoat is a dull white... no, almost gray. over this is several other colors, mostly oranges, yellows, and some gold tint. she has a sharp muzzle and slightly rounded ears. her legs are long and thin, though shes quite small. her eyes are black, flecked messily with golden chips, but rather dull. so maybe shes not entirely beautiful; but shes good at heart, which is all that matters, really. Pelt Tabby, with tints of brown and some gold. Eye Beautiful golden-green color. Body Nice and slender. Special{type here} Interior. [/color][/center] Summery well, shes not to complicated...well, maybe she is. hes very anti-social; and is fine with that. she has an overactive imagination, and knows it. and she knows that talking about her wild mind with others only makes them thinks shes crazy; imagination is a sickness to her. she doesnt discourage her imagination though; she just holds it in until shes alone, then lets it have full reign. along with being very imaginative, shes also a bit sarcastic, and a pro at self-criticism. shes a bit...disapointed with the world, and herself. she doesnt see either of them clearly; her mind has always tried to hide it from her, and not just in a figurative sense either. she actually doesnt see things right; her version of the world is ugly and imperfect, and other cats sometimes see this. they never mention it, which is just as well. she can be a bit snappy...and is paranoid about everything. shell try and write off everything as her imagination and lack of sleep, which is reasonable; she tends to not sleep well, for lots of reasons. one is the pain; she suffers from constant headaches, and a pain in her lower jaw. she also isnt a big fan of light, and theres just too much of it lately. she likes the dim, dull world that her mind tries to create. she isnt really happy in this world; but not unhappy either. shes just learned to live with everything. Positive {type here} Negative {type here} Likes {type here} Dislikes {type here} History. [/color][/center] Story The moon was high on this soon-to-be bloody night. The wind was barely there, all that could be heard was the rustling of leaves as three feline-esque shapes moved through the undergrowth. One was large, her stomach sagging from the weight of full milk-sacs. She was slate gray, with small tufts of tan fur under her ears and around her chin. She looked tired, oh so very tired. The female kept looking back at the two smaller forms that struggled to keep up with her. They were her kits, a tom and a she-cat, both tiny as newborns. While they were most obviously not newborns, they couldn't be more than two or three moons. The tom was happily skipping along after her, but the female was moving at a slower pace, glancing around with narrowed eyes. It was obvious the fem was smarter than the male.
"Come, kits, we mustn't be late!" The mother called back to her kits. "Mum, where're we goin'?" The female called, prowling in circles around her brother, who obviously did not care whether there was a badger, or a fox, or something waiting out there to gobble them up. The tiny she-cat hissed into the darkness, being protective of her brother. Moonlight filtered through the leaves onto her shaggy bodice, and her magnificently bright colors could be seen with ease. Orange, red, brown, yellow, gold... it was all there. Like a cornucopia of colors, this was the kit soon to be named Harvestkit of Thunderclan, though she had no idea. "Mum, where are we going, I asked?" She turned to her mother, but she was nowhere to be found. "Mum? Brother?" Neither of her family members were anywhere to be seen. She turned round in circles, finally catching sight of her brother. "Brother! Where is mum?" But he did not reply. The tom just stood there, staring into the darkness, whiskers quivering.
Oh no... The little she-cat thought something horrible had happened. She ran past her brother and into the darkness, running through brambles, stumbling over roots. She made her way as fast as she could to her mother, following the scent of her sweet-smelling pelt. But there was a new smell, a bitter one. The sour smell of freshly-shed blood. Cat blood. She soon laid eyes upon the havoc wreaked upon her mother's body. A mangled carcass lay before her, blood spattered everywhere. And right in the middle of it, a fox. The bright orange pelt of the sly animal was splotched messily with dark shadows, most likely her mother's blood. The fox was just leaning down to grab hold of the carcass when the kit shook her head and screamed. "No! No! Nonononono! Mother!" She dashed over to stand at her mother's side, but didn't make it that far. The fox stepped into her path, maw swooping down at her. She turned and ran as fast as she could, her tiny paws not getting her too far through the woods very fast. The fox was almost upon her, and then--
"I told you!" A few Thunderclan warriors stood behind an apprentice, sniffing the air. As soon as that apprentice shouted, two took off at the fox. The fox ran, fast as he could, though the forest. The apprentice walked up to the kit and sniffed her. "Rogue." He said, turning to the warrior remaining. He nodded and sniffed around. "Three of them. Where's the others, kit?" He growled at the small she-cat. She lowered her head. "Mum's been killed by the fox. And brother..." She looked around, seeing nobody else. But she was standing on something sticky that smelled of blood. "He... he... he was k-kil..." She had to say no more. The warrior walked over and picked her up by the scruff of her neck, carrying her to camp.
The kit was taken in by a lovely queen whose kits had died of greencough. She named the lovely kit Harvestkit, and raised her as if she were her very own kit. She asked her questions galore of what her life had been like as a loner, but gradually Harvestkit lost almost all memories of even having a different life, having a different family. The queen had become her mother, the clan her family. She could not dream of another life, for this was her home, the way she wanted to live. Thunderclan was where she belonged. Birth {type here} Dreams {type here}
Other. [/color][/center] Picture XxX Codeword Hey, nice site! Author's note Rawr. Grumpy kitty. [/size][/blockquote] [size=1][blockquote] [center][size=5][color=00bfe4][i]Harvestpaw[/i][/color][/size] "quote/saying about the character"[blockquote][/center] [color=00bfe4][b]Age[/b][/color] 7 moons [color=00bfe4][b]Gender[/b][/color] She-cat [color=00bfe4][b]Clan[/b][/color] Any Clan That needs the most cats. [color=00bfe4][b]Rank:[/b][/color] Medicine cat Apprentice [/blockquote] [center][size=5][color=00bfe4][i]Exterior[/i].[/size][/color][/center] [blockquote][color=00bfe4][b]Summery:[/b][/color] she sees herself in a different way, like she sees everything. because of the war going on between her mind and her eyes, she thinks shes much uglier than she really is. her undercoat is a dull white... no, almost gray. over this is several other colors, mostly oranges, yellows, and some gold tint. she has a sharp muzzle and slightly rounded ears. her legs are long and thin, though shes quite small. her eyes are black, flecked messily with golden chips, but rather dull. so maybe shes not entirely beautiful; but shes good at heart, which is all that matters, really. [color=00bfe4][b]Pelt[/b][/color] Tabby, with tints of brown and some gold. [color=00bfe4][b]Eye[/b][/color] Beautiful golden-green color. [color=00bfe4][b]Body[/b][/color] Nice and slender. [color=00bfe4][b]Special[/b][/color]{type here}[/blockquote] [center][size=5][color=00bfe4][i]Interior[/i].[/size][/color][/center] [blockquote][color=00bfe4][b]Summery[/b][/color] well, shes not to complicated...well, maybe she is. hes very anti-social; and is fine with that. she has an overactive imagination, and knows it. and she knows that talking about her wild mind with others only makes them thinks shes crazy; imagination is a sickness to her. she doesnt discourage her imagination though; she just holds it in until shes alone, then lets it have full reign. along with being very imaginative, shes also a bit sarcastic, and a pro at self-criticism. shes a bit...disapointed with the world, and herself. she doesnt see either of them clearly; her mind has always tried to hide it from her, and not just in a figurative sense either. she actually doesnt see things right; her version of the world is ugly and imperfect, and other cats sometimes see this. they never mention it, which is just as well. she can be a bit snappy...and is paranoid about everything. shell try and write off everything as her imagination and lack of sleep, which is reasonable; she tends to not sleep well, for lots of reasons. one is the pain; she suffers from constant headaches, and a pain in her lower jaw. she also isnt a big fan of light, and theres just too much of it lately. she likes the dim, dull world that her mind tries to create. she isnt really happy in this world; but not unhappy either. shes just learned to live with everything. [color=00bfe4][b]Positive[/b][/color] {type here} [color=00bfe4][b]Negative[/b][/color] {type here} [color=00bfe4][b]Likes[/b][/color] {type here} [color=00bfe4][b]Dislikes[/b][/color] {type here}[/blockquote] [center][size=5][color=00bfe4][i]History[/i].[/size][/color][/center] [blockquote][color=00bfe4][b]Story[/b][/color] The moon was high on this soon-to-be bloody night. The wind was barely there, all that could be heard was the rustling of leaves as three feline-esque shapes moved through the undergrowth. One was large, her stomach sagging from the weight of full milk-sacs. She was slate gray, with small tufts of tan fur under her ears and around her chin. She looked tired, oh so very tired. The female kept looking back at the two smaller forms that struggled to keep up with her. They were her kits, a tom and a she-cat, both tiny as newborns. While they were most obviously not newborns, they couldn't be more than two or three moons. The tom was happily skipping along after her, but the female was moving at a slower pace, glancing around with narrowed eyes. It was obvious the fem was smarter than the male.
"Come, kits, we mustn't be late!" The mother called back to her kits. "Mum, where're we goin'?" The female called, prowling in circles around her brother, who obviously did not care whether there was a badger, or a fox, or something waiting out there to gobble them up. The tiny she-cat hissed into the darkness, being protective of her brother. Moonlight filtered through the leaves onto her shaggy bodice, and her magnificently bright colors could be seen with ease. Orange, red, brown, yellow, gold... it was all there. Like a cornucopia of colors, this was the kit soon to be named Harvestkit of Thunderclan, though she had no idea. "Mum, where are we going, I asked?" She turned to her mother, but she was nowhere to be found. "Mum? Brother?" Neither of her family members were anywhere to be seen. She turned round in circles, finally catching sight of her brother. "Brother! Where is mum?" But he did not reply. The tom just stood there, staring into the darkness, whiskers quivering.
Oh no... The little she-cat thought something horrible had happened. She ran past her brother and into the darkness, running through brambles, stumbling over roots. She made her way as fast as she could to her mother, following the scent of her sweet-smelling pelt. But there was a new smell, a bitter one. The sour smell of freshly-shed blood. Cat blood. She soon laid eyes upon the havoc wreaked upon her mother's body. A mangled carcass lay before her, blood spattered everywhere. And right in the middle of it, a fox. The bright orange pelt of the sly animal was splotched messily with dark shadows, most likely her mother's blood. The fox was just leaning down to grab hold of the carcass when the kit shook her head and screamed. "No! No! Nonononono! Mother!" She dashed over to stand at her mother's side, but didn't make it that far. The fox stepped into her path, maw swooping down at her. She turned and ran as fast as she could, her tiny paws not getting her too far through the woods very fast. The fox was almost upon her, and then--
"I told you!" A few Thunderclan warriors stood behind an apprentice, sniffing the air. As soon as that apprentice shouted, two took off at the fox. The fox ran, fast as he could, though the forest. The apprentice walked up to the kit and sniffed her. "Rogue." He said, turning to the warrior remaining. He nodded and sniffed around. "Three of them. Where's the others, kit?" He growled at the small she-cat. She lowered her head. "Mum's been killed by the fox. And brother..." She looked around, seeing nobody else. But she was standing on something sticky that smelled of blood. "He... he... he was k-kil..." She had to say no more. The warrior walked over and picked her up by the scruff of her neck, carrying her to camp.
The kit was taken in by a lovely queen whose kits had died of greencough. She named the lovely kit Harvestkit, and raised her as if she were her very own kit. She asked her questions galore of what her life had been like as a loner, but gradually Harvestkit lost almost all memories of even having a different life, having a different family. The queen had become her mother, the clan her family. She could not dream of another life, for this was her home, the way she wanted to live. Thunderclan was where she belonged. [color=00bfe4][b]Birth[/b][/color] {type here} [color=00bfe4][b]Dreams[/b][/color] {type here} [/blockquote] [center][size=5][color=00bfe4][i]Other[/i].[/size][/color][/center] [blockquote][color=00bfe4][b]Picture[/b][/color] [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/meskill/166829695/] XxX[/url] [color=00bfe4][b]Codeword[/b][/color] Hey, nice site! [color=00bfe4][b]Author's note[/b][/color] Rawr. Grumpy kitty. [/blockquote][/size][/blockquote]
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Post by Moony™ on May 11, 2008 17:26:11 GMT -5
We still need Birth, Dreams, and Quote. =) And I <3 your story! Thunderclan's fine too.
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I v y
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Post by I v y on May 11, 2008 17:35:46 GMT -5
There we go!
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Post by Moony™ on May 11, 2008 17:36:35 GMT -5
Beautiful bio, ACCEPTED!
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