Post by Sly on Oct 26, 2009 20:06:50 GMT -5
OAKSTAR
"heh, what's the fun in planning a battle? I wanna be in one!"
"heh, what's the fun in planning a battle? I wanna be in one!"
Age[/blockquote]
30 MOONS
Gender
TOM
Clan
SHADOWCLAN
Rank
LEADER
Exterior.
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Pelt
Oakstar is a dashing tom. Quite the eye-catcher. He has a stunning reddish brown pelt, with lush thick fur, that almost always has alittle ruffle in it. He isn't one to groom alot, only when it's time to sleep, or when he gets up. But with his messy looking fur, he still looks handsome. He has hard muscles rippling under his fur, broad shoulders and head.
His build is lean and muscular, thanks to his many training sessions he had when he was an apprentice, which was just a couple sun-rises ago. His fur is perfect for hunting, making him blend in with the many trees and leaves around the territory, making him just a shadow in the wind.
There is one lone thick dark stripe that runs from the top of his forehead back all the way to his tail tip. His tail is mostly a dark dark brown, going up to the base it fades off to his regular deep reddish brown fur color. His back legs are strong, and his claws and teeth are sharp. He has little tuffs of fur on his rounded ears. Big paws, and a thick furred under-belly, Oakstar is one healthy feline. He has a black tipped tail.
Eye
His eyes are the color of an autumn leaf, just turn yellow. Their mostly yellow, but with some tints of green in there with them. His eyes glow at night, and shine bright in the sun. Their are little hints of ice in them, making his gaze piercing, but he can't help his cold look, look behind the eyes to see the true Oakstar...
Body
Like stated, he has a tall and muscular frame. Hard muscles ripple under his thick coat, and he has strong back legs. His claws are razor sharp and long, along with his white teeth. His body was build for battle, he's one of the fittest and battle-tough looking toms in all of ShadowClan.
Special
none really, other than him not being the only russet furred yellow/green eyed cat. he has a twin, her name is Foxtail.
Interior.
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Positive
Daring and Strong---------->
Oakstar is a very smart and cunning tom, who would do anything to help his clan. He is outspoken and brave, not hesitating to put his life before one of his own clan-mates. This tom knows not boundaries when it comes to doing what is right. He likes to take the more challenging path, aside from the easy one, he just believes that putting his all is what will make him a better cat.
His motive has always been his will to do what is right, and to fight for what he believes in. He is a strong fighter, and will fight with tooth and claw to save his clan, but knows not to go as far as spilling blood for the wrong reasons. He would never kill unless absolutely necessary, he really doesn't want to kill, he also wishes he didn't have to fight. But he knows he has to in order to save the ones he loves, and to survive out in this cold and cruel world.
Calm and Kind---------->
Oakstar has a heart like any other cat around. He is very much a gentleman and has a soft side. He likes to help out others with nothing given to him in return. He's nice to others, and doesn't like to hold grudges. Caring for the one's he loves, this cat would do anything to help out a friend in need. He is also a very calm natured character. Doesn't go out looking for adventure, the adventure usually finds him first. He isn't an all too impatient cat, he'll wait for things. Isn't one to step to conclusions all too quickly without studying the evidence closely.
Being a ShadowClan cat, some would expect Oakstar to be aggressive and ruthless towards others, but on the contrary, he is the exact opposite. But that still doesn't mean he can't get abit nasty, he does have ShadowClan blood in him.
Oakstar has a deep caring for kits, for their safety as well as their life. He does hope to have kits of his own one day, but with all that is happening with his new warrior responsibilities, it's impossible to settle down for just a second.
Besides, he doesn't even have a mate yet. Speaking of mates, it won't be hard for this handsome to even get one. But he isn't one to just choose a willing she-cat and have kits, but then forget about ever having them, like some toms he knows do. He wants to find that special someone he won't be able to live one day without thinking about. If he ever finds that one she-cat, he'll treat her with the utter-most respect, and do anything and everything for her. He'll go as far as dis-respecting the leader if he or she does something to harm his mate. He'll be the one to show his soft and gentle side to his mate. He'll tell all his secrets to her, and just act like all the troubles in the world are gone with her around.
Charming and Humorous---------->
This tom has a funny bone or two in him. He likes to make others smile, and with the way his clan mates act, it can be kinda tough to. He likes to make small jokes and just to show others that not all things in this world are bad. He's quite the encourager as well, giving good advise and making wise decisions.
Oakstar is also quite the charmer. He chooses his words carefully, and is a smooth talker. Out-going and casual, this tom could best be describe as being cool. He's not afraid to let loose and just hang out with others. Put the work aside, and just sit down with some fresh-kill to have some talk time.
Overall, Oakstar is just a regular cat. But perhaps placed in the wrong clan. Whatever the reason, he is one of ShadowClan's finest warriors, and maybe one day will lead. But only StarClan knows where this tom's paws will take him.
A natural leader------>
Oakstar was build to lead, he has always been looked upon as the head cat. His eyes just shoot leader at you, one look in his hard stare, and you'll know he's a commander. He has a good strong commanding voice, and will keep others in line. He doesn't worry too easily, unless it's REALLY important. He's always battle-ready, and he has a good head on his shoulders. Very smart, and determined to do good for his clan. One flick of his long tail, and you'll do whatever he says. But with leadership, comes responsibility. Which this tom has alot of, he is very responsible and knows how to handle things. Keeps a straight face in the darkest and most serious situations, careful not to give anything away by his stance or expression. Through his tough times he's lived through, he knows what's out there, and will do whatever it takes to serve his clan well.
Negative
Stubborn and Determined---------->
Here's where his ShadowClan blood shows most. Oakstar is one of the stubbornest cats maybe in all of ShadowClan. He is the cat to state his opinion no matter how serious the situation is. He can get into trouble with his sharp tongue. This is when the tern, "hold your tongue" is used most for this tom. It's not his fault he wants to help make decisions, and to lead the clan into the right direction. He has abit of an attitude as well. He gets annoyed easily and that's when his stubborn side shows. He is very determined as well. Wanting to do his very best for the clan, but his hard-head can sometimes difficult things. It's just that no one listens to him. Just because he's a new warrior, doesn't mean he doesn't have some important role in the clan as well!
When he was an apprentice, his voice was barely heard beyond a cat's whisker, but now that he's a warrior, maybe they'll listen!
Oakstar is a natural leader too, he likes to take charge, but not as far as to seem bossy. He's a respectful tom, and will back down if he is being told too. All he wants for his clan is that it to be led down the right path, and not provoked by ambitious desires. He wants ShadowClan to be seen other than ruthless and heart-less. Real cats live in this clan, and the others just think it is being run by rogues! Which is a lie!
Oakstar can be considered weak for his rash decisions to do right, and not to just jump to problems they face with tooth and claw. He doesn't want to be a cat that settles things with split blood, all he wants is peace and right.
In battle, Oakstar can be described as tough and fierce. He's fighting for his clan, how else would you think him to be? He only goes as far as to leave a small scar, and to scare. He won't kill to teach a cat a lesson, that's wrong in his opinion. He's also swift and a cunning thinker when it comes to battling. He was taught by the best you know. He thinks through his motives before doing so. And if a cat's down on the field, you can bet every scrap of prey that this cat will go back for them.
Likes and Dislikes
He loves to fight, fight fight fight. But that does not mean he wants to go looking for one... He loves to be ready for anything, such as battles, or attacks from rival clans. You'll see him, even now as a leader, practicing his fighting techniques, teaching the young apprentices some moves, and teaching them the ways of battle.
He especially loves planning one, telling others where to be when they do go into one. He doesn't like to be on the side-lines, he'll go out and join in.
He does this because he wants the best for his clan, and wants to protect it. To show others that ShadowClan aren't just abunch of hungry rogues.
He also enjoys sun-bathing, and just being alone. He'll take morning hunts sometimes, even though he isn't the biggest fan of hunting. He'll just take a walk really.
He cares deeply for his twin sister, Foxtail; and her kits. She had them a couple moons ago, they are now apprentices.
History.
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[birth included. o.O]
Believe it or not, this tom was both born and raised in the heart of ShadowClan. He was in a little of four. He has two sisters, and one brother. His litter-mate are all basically the opposite him, except for his twin sister, Foxtail. He and her are best of friends, and always stuck together as apprentices.
His other two litter-mates were Darkpaw and Pinescar. Darkpaw got killed due to foolishness. He tried to go up against a badger, but got killed in the process. His brother, Pinescar is still alive, ambitious and mean as ever. His sister Foxtail is a beautiful and gentle queen now, with a litter of kits on the way. She took on a mate when still an apprentice, and was expecting then, her kits will be born later this moon.
Oakstar's mother was Treesong, and his father was Hawkstare. Sadly, his mother died just acouple moons ago from a bad belly wound. His father is still living, among the senior warriors right now. Oakstar's father never really loved him, he was quite mean to his kits actually. Except for Pinescar and Darkpaw. Somehow, Hawkstare actually liked them better than he did his twin kits. It was rather ungrateful of Hawkstare, and as a kit and apprentice, Oakstar tried to get Hawkstare's eyes to light up like they did for his two brothers..but they never did, they never would. Even when he became a warrior with Pinescar and Foxtail, Hawkstare had congratulated Pinescar over his two other kits. Oakstar's warrior name was Oakstripe.
To this day, Oakstar still is saddened by this fact of his father not loving him, but knows not to dwell. Hawkstare was a senior warrior now, so he would have to put up with him for a few more moons. Until he goes to the elder's den, and he wouldn't have to see the evil grins from Pinescar about how daddy loved him more. It was sickening, and Oakstar sometimes hated Pinescar for being so fox-hearted.
To this day, Oakstar still is saddened by this fact of his father not loving him, but knows not to dwell. Hawkstare was a senior warrior now, so he would have to put up with him for a few more moons. Until he goes to the elder's den, and he wouldn't have to see the evil grins from Pinescar about how daddy loved him more. It was sickening, and Oakstar sometimes hated Pinescar for being so fox-hearted.
Oakstar was mentored by a now senior warrior named, Silentflame. One of his fathers' best friends, Silentflame was thrilled to be mentoring one the kits of the great Hawkstare. Silentflame was a skilled warrior, more in the arts of battle, than hunting. He taught Oakstar so much, it was almost saddening to be quiting the training with his mentor. But knew Silentflame was proud of him for becoming a fine ShadowClan warrior.
Oakstar has been in two battles before his warrior-ship. He was in a battle with WindClan, and one with a fit with RiverClan. Considering he fought in both, he has one battle scar on his right flank, not all too noticeable, but it is definably his first battle scar. No lives were lost in the battles, except for Willowdream, and Hazepaw. Hazepaw was one of Oakstar's best friends, he was hoping they would become warriors together, but sadly that did not happen... Willowdream was an old warrior, who probably if hadn't died, would have been sent to the elders den for retirement that faithful day.
He became the leader for ShadowClan after the past leader died, he was honored to take the role as leader, he was good as deputy and hopes he'll be awesome as the leader. His dreadful father passed away not too long ago, from green-cough, he grieved like his other kin did, but he had a big weight lifted off his broad shoulders. His sister finally had her kits, three healthy ones. They are now apprentices.
Pinescar is deeply jealous of Oakstar, and doesn't do well to hide it. The russet furred leader has to keep his eyes out for his senior warrior of a brother...
Dreams
Oakstar's dream is to lead ShadowClan to the top. He wants them to be respected and looked upon as hero's, and not killers. The clan's past has been not too good, and he wants them to be better than that. Dispite his half-clan heritage, this tom doesn't let that keep him from being the best leader he can be for ShadowClan. Even in these hard-ships, Oakstar still looks to the good side of things, wanting ShadowClan to survive and live long and prosper.
Another dream of his is to find a mate, and start a family soon, that would be nice.
Other.
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Author's note
oakstar ftw! xP
