Swanfeather's Song: Application-Bio thing

[whispersong]

Swansong

"Hear the elegant song of the swan feather."


Age
Twelve moons
Gender
She-cat
Clan
Thunderclan,
Rank
Medicine cat; if taken, warrior


Exterior.

Pelt
Lily white, soft, short-haired fur.
Eye
The color of dew on a leaf during the zenith of greenleaf (basically, green)
Body
Slender but strong, long-limbed, straight back
Special
Creamy beige star-like spot where neck meets chest
Interior.


Summary
Most cats would describe Swansong as a passive cat who is peaceful but will attack with devil's club- sharp claws if she has no other choice. Effervescent and passionate to follow the warrior code, be fair, and heal others, Swansong is quiet but efficient and diligent. She is swift to correct herself and make things clear, but is just as quick to clam up if she thinks her advice may make another indignant.
Positive
Diligent worker. Loves healing. Not peace nut, though - loves a good grapple.
Negative
A little too quiet - expresses feelings, but is quick to amend herself and hates to offend others. This causes her to hold back on wise comments that may help the clan. Froststar has to press her for details of dreams.
Likes and Dislikes
Loves healing, organizing everything, and basically being a Clan cat. Hates cats who bully or taunt other cats, especially if the victims are disabled or can't defend themselves verbally or physically. Hates snappy or mean cats; despises mood swings. Hobbies are stocking up like mad on herbs when she can and measuring out tiny doses of herbs when all is well and she wants to strenghen others, even if they don't need it.



History.


Story
Swanpaw was born to a loving mother. She was always curious about her wherabouts.As a result, she frequently wandered off from camp to dillydally in the forest. There, she often smelled the plants around her and wondered what their names and uses were. Consequently, her dream of becoming the ThunderClan medicine cat apprentice formed. However, Swanpaw was always quickly searched out and found during her enterprises outside camp.Then, she was scolded and punished, restricted to staying within the nursery. Though she learned her lesson, Swanpaw usually watched the medicine cat work with herbs and dreamt of working with such diligence and wisdom. Swanpaw’s kithood was filled with wonder, excitement, herbs, and medicine cat dreams.
Birth
Born during sunrise on the zenith of leafgreen. Redfeather - mother. Crystalsong - sister. Mapleheart - father.
Dreams
Goal: be the best med. cat ever. Dreams : meets Cinderpelt, Spottedleaf, Yellowfang, and Leafpool in them. Future life plans: can't mate, so... ?

Other.


Picture

Codeword
MRNosmileRRliterateLaboldWRtalk You asked for all the bold words, right? Here it is!
Author's note
Found rpg sites and proboards on google when searching for fan sites on warriors. I like Leafpool a lot!! And Whitewing. And Robinwing.

[Moony™]

Wow, Whispersong! Welcome to the site!
So, currently our med cat is open. But we’ll hold auditions later, so you can use this character to audition. But right now I’ll remain as a warrior.

I really like how you described her—you have exotic, interesting vocabulary too!

Oh and for Exterior, you’ve hit the main points. But you’ll need to make a paragraph as the “summary” you did on the interior.
I really like her personality too—it’s really realistic and very detailed. Well done!

Don’t forget to check for grammar... it’s nothing minor but some typos. Like spaces between the period and the next sentence. And in the History>Dreams>Goal section, type in sentences. But that’s okay—everything else was splendid!

xD Haha, the code word is okay. The “MR” “RR” part was just for decorations, but that’s right!

So just add the exterior summary and you're good to go!