Finding myself -Burnkit-F-Riverclan-

[snowkit]

Burnkit
"This charred heart is mending..."

Age:5 1/2 moons



Gender:Female



Clan:River clan


Rank:Kit

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Exterior.

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Pelt: A deep amber color, she has darker, almost brown amber streaks and she also has two dark gray front paws.



Eye:Amber



Defining Traits:She's still a kit so she doesn't have very many defined features or strong muscles. She does have a rather long tail and long body, she isn't skinny though.



special:none

Interior.

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Positive Traits:She's Fairly clam and has a level head (she doesn't anger easily) and she has a rather curious streak. She loves to Help out in anyway she can (even if she gets in the way!) and is eager to serve her clan.



Negative:Because she's curious she often winds up pokeing her nose into places she shouldn't. When she makes up her mind she's very stubborn and wont change, and feels like she has to be incharge. She a bit bossy when it comes to younger kits. She also doesn't like to be interrupted when she's daydreaming or thinking.



Likes:Chasing mice, helping around the camp, practicing warriors moves, swimming and her mother.

Dislikes:Mud in between her claws, cats bossing her around, people thinking that she's weak.

History.

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History:Burnkit is the only one of her litter to survive. Her mother died giving birth to the kits in leaf-bare and her father rann off after the kits were born. Because they were born in leaf-bare the other kits didn't make it. But as the oldest Burnkit was able to survive, but barely. Her paws were becoming frost-bitten fast and she couldn't see as a new-born kit. Luckily a Riverclan cat found her and her litter mates and brought them back to camp. Burnkit was raised in riverclan ever since, but she fears anything cold and dark.


Birth:Born in leaf-bare, all relatives dead or unknown.



Dreams:Burnkit hopes to become a great warrior someday, but she's also been facsinated with the medicince cat den. She's still unsure about where she wants to go.

Other.

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Picture



Code:NO-SMILE-LITERATE-TALK



Anything else?:this is my first bio and I hope I did everything correctly! ^^;

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[b√αиk]

Very nice biography. They only problem I have is that you should add more to each paragraph because it seems like it's slacking description. Just add more of your thoughts to Burnkit and try and shape your character with more thoughts. That way it tells more about your cat and helps us understand her more. But nice bio so far! =]