What should I do? (read post below poll first!)

[miss. s k i p]

Okay, I'm writing a story, but I'm not completely sure how I want it to play out.

Basic Storyline:

Girl sneaks out of house when grounded. Goes to late night party. Goes to get back in car. Car has been vandalized, not currently drivable. Girl, frustrated, has to walk 4 miles home where her parents are going to be furious. Starts walking. Ankles get grabbed as she walks past a sewer, and gets pulled in by a creature that lives in the sewer.

HERES WHERE I'M STUCK.

Here are the poll choices in depth. Please read them so you can actually understand them before you vote. ^^ (they are numbered accordingly to their poll choices.

(1) The girl is terrified of the creature and he is a beast. Her hottie boyfriend eventually will somehow rescue her, la de da, happily ever after. {not my favorite choice...} (creature is unhuman the whole time)

(2) Creature is ugly, but kindhearted and just lonely, which is his reasoning for capturing the girl. They fall in love and each time she kisses him a small piece of him becomes beautiful bu the kisses have to be really true (meaning she must actually love him) and cannot be forced. Only one of these kisses can be made per day. {the creature is unhuman in beginning and human at the end)

(3) The creature is beautiful and mysterious and very curious about the girl but is very shy. He is goodhearted, but misunderstood. Everyone who knows about him hate him and have even tried to get him executed or in jail just for being different and not completely human. He is very very shy but secretly loves her. She ends up loving him back but the creature doesn't want her future to be ruined when everyone realizes that she has chosen him and turns against her as well and he is worried for her safety with him. (creature looks human but is not completely human and he his very handsom)

[b√αиk]

My thoughts are coming soon but I have to leave....

[Moony™]

Story 2 all the way!

Story 1 would just be a simple 'fairytale' like story... nahh.
Story 2 is awesome. xD I like the idea of the monster becoming more human and it's more original than number 1 or 3. It also means that the girl likes his personality rather than the looks. -awww- xD

[George]

i luv the third one! it reminds me So mush of the mutants in x-men: how he gets like persucuted! GO WITH NUMBA 3!

[miss. s k i p]

Choice 2 is my favorite, I'll probably go with that. Just seeing what the people of earth would rather read! XD

[b√αиk]

Ok here's what I think don't take it personally........

(1) To simple. Pus I feel sorry for the sewer creature unless he was messed up and somehow ruined the girls life.... but that's another story. You could use number 1 but then again you would really have to be creative and make it long though that would be tough.

(2) Sounds awesome it's almost like Beauty & the Beast. I think though she shouldn't fall in love with him and instead she should be angry he's keeping her hostage sort of. I don't know sort of like you could just make it maybe when she touches him and maybe a kiss makes him more human than a finger touch. I choose this one because it's original and I dreamt about it lol. Though when he's human he should still be different. People should also hate him like when he's inhuman like the 3rd one.

(3) No offense but this one is horrible! It's exactly like Twilight. EXACTLY. Sorry but I read it and I was like you have the same problem as me though I like the part about people hating him and wanting him dead.

Anyways love the idea for story you should start out writing rough drafts for the first chapter and see how you like it. Good Luck!

[Draco]

I really like all of them, but number 2 is the bomb! xD
( in other words, I say 2 is the best! )

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