Phoenixfur

[George]

Phoenixfur
"Don't get on HER nerves!"

Age

20 moons

Gender

She-Cat

Clan

Shadowclan

Rank

Warrior

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Exterior.

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Summary

Phoenixfur, in general is a soft black color. She has a ginger blotch on her chest. She has these soft, compassionate blue and black eyes. She also has these dark blue stripes going though the blue color.

Pelt

• Soft Black Color
  
• Ginger bloch on chest
  
• Unusual white star on forehead
  
• White tail tip
  
• Soft, but short.
  

Eye

• Soft light blue, and coal black.
  
• Darker blue stripes going through the light blue.
  
• Bright
  
• Expressive
  

Body

• Slim
  
• Long-legged
  
• Sleek
  
• Beautiful
  

Special

• Eyes enchant Toms.
  
• Can jump very high/far
  

Interior.

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Summary

Phoenixfur, in general is a sweet, but fierce cat. She will love you, then kill you. You really don't want to get on her bad side, do you? I thought so..... Shes one of the most laid-back cats ever. She usually doesn't react too badly to things, mostly.

Positive

• Sweet
  
• Loyal
  
• Loving
  

Negative

• Sarcastic
  
• Friece
  
• Twisted
  

Likes and Dislikes
Likes: Kits, Butterflys, Hunting.

Dislikes: Mean cats, moths, patrols.

History.

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Story

Phoenixfur was born to a loner named Blizzy. Blizzy hated her and her sister, Fallenwing. They were forced to stay with her because they were only kits, and they couldn't survive without her. But, when they turned 3 moons, they left after Fallenwing got beat by Blizzy, leaving her with a long, twisting scar. They looked for help, and help was found when they ran into Shadowclan's Medicene Cat, Northpointe. Fallenwing was healed, and they became apprenices. Her mentor was Lightningtail. She had a good relationship with him.

Lightningtail and her hit a speed-bump when she said she didn't like him any more: she wanted a new mentor. She got her wish: her new mentor was Blizzardpool. She liked Blizzardpool much better. Blizzardpool died though :snif...:, so again she got placed with Lightningtail. She finnished training with Lightningtail. It took a while for her to become a warrior. Heraldstar named her Phoenixfur for having a ginger chest.
Birth

She was born to Blizzy, and has a sis named Fallen. Fallen will become Fallenwing. Blizzy hated both Phoenixfur and Fallenwing. Her kit-hood was rough. She had no one else for help for her mother, so Fallenwing and her just left Blizzy.

Dreams
She wishes to haves kits/a mate soon.

Other.

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Codeword

I love the world

Author's note

OPTIONAL - ANYTHING ELSE TO SAY

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[b√αиk]

Your biography is awesome but before I accept you need to add a little more. For example:
- tell about her kithood
- maybe her warrior ceremony
- describe the texture and length of her fur
- give more of a summary. like how would she react if something bad happened?
- really just add more description and i'll accept it!

Nice to meet you Foxie and I'm glad you joined. Welcome to WW!

[George]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!! <3

[miss. s k i p]

Yep, just add some more juicy details to her story, like Blank said. Same deal as what I said with Nightfree, we just need some more length and description about what happened all these years, like some stories or what not.

[George]

ok, i will

[miss. s k i p]

Once again, same deal as Nightfall's, and I'm still looking for a littlebit more. Maybe another paragraph? You're so close!!

{sorry if I sound all picky and stiff. Not trying to be. ^^}

[George]

it's ok


and it's NightFREE!

[miss. s k i p]

Oh my bad on the Nightfree thing, my dad was just talking about how he was mad becasue he wasn't going to get to the gym to workout before nightfall and he kept talking about it while I was typing...must have gotten messed up. ^^ haha, sorry!

Jolly good! <- always wanted to say that... Phoenixfur is accepted!