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Post by harrald on Dec 20, 2008 11:41:05 GMT -5
Northpointe nodded numbly, emotionless, as she listened to her leader's complaints. Man, he could talk the feathers off a bird! And always about the same thing, every moon, after moon, after moon. Northpointe was going insane! Shaking herself, she tried to tune out the over-talkative leader. Recent thoughts on his new leadership status had flown all through the camp, but the most powerful and completely truthful statements were as follows.
"He's too soft for anything tough."
"He'll turn ShadowClan into a kittypet Clan!"
"What does StarClan want to happen to us now, turn us into fluffy ThunderClanners?"
"I think he was just pretending to be tough for the position."
Unfortunately, all those things had been said by the one and only Northpointe. I mean, a cat who is always happy and upbeat and talks a lot isn't for ShadowClan. Without so much as a glance, she flicked her tail at him dismissively.
"Stop talking to me." She growled, her ears perking up. Someone was at the entrance of her den.
"Hello?"
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Post by blackrose9994 on Mar 6, 2009 22:50:33 GMT -5
They, reply on mine too, i have the thread "Wandering..." This will make ur story interesting!!1  Blackrose walked in and exchanged tongues with her. The onyx-black cat with white paws, a white tip at her tail, and distinctive ginger markings touched noses with the former medicine cat. "I need you.." Blackrose hissed in pain. "What is it?" Northpointe asked. "I was attcked by a dog on centeral campus..this is a problem!" the black she-cat's voice turned serious. "Your injury, or the dog?" Northpointe tilted her head in confusion. "The dog! There shouldn't be ANY attacks from dogs IN the camp itself!!! Where are the warriors?!" Blackrose raised her voice at the thought. "I've heard they are on a journey..maybe this wasn't any old, dumb dog! What did it look like?" Northpointe reached up onto a leafy shelf and grabbed some herbs. "Hmm..as I recall, it was big, strong, had pointed ears, and a horrible smell! It also had some bald spots on its body--a body so slim, that you could see its ribcage!!! Oh, I think it howls, and--" Blackrose stared into space. "WAIT!!! Pointed ears, ribcage, and howls?! NOOO!!! How come this was never announced?! Why couldn't we've learned sooner?! WHY?!?!?!?" Norhtpointe paced around her den. Blackrose layed on her right side and showed her leg wound. "What is it?!" "Coyotes..this shouldn't have happened! These creatures get so desperate, that they wander into marked territories and feed on the lives on others! Was anyone else hurt?" Blackrose scenced the panic in Northpointe's voice. "My best friend Berryfrost, ma'am," Blackrose moaned. Northpointe placed some healed herbs into Blackrose's mouth, and spread some on her leg. "Isss!!! Careful!!!" Blackrose hissed in agony. "Sorry, I've had a horrible day, dealing with leader mockers and StarClan and all that crap--now I'm worrying over the stupid warriors not being here to take on the anorexic wolves!!" Northpointe began to press harder on her patient's leg. "I SAID OUCH!!!!!" Blackrose clawed the old medicine cat's face. "AHHH!!!! What did you do that for?!" Northpointe screeched. "No, no..im sorry, I'm over-reacting, I cant stand pain," Blackrose purred. "Then why are you a warrior?" Northpointe asked. "I--I hate evryone.." Blackrose mewed. "Ha ha, very funny," Northpointe purred. "No, I mean it! Twolegs kicked me til i broke my leg so i would stay under a park bench to die, and ThunderClan pisses me off!!! Gosh!!! Why can't a leader evr keep my kits safe?!?!?!" Blackrose complained. Northpointe's ears perked up, and she let out a gasp in disbelief. "You--and ThunderClan's leader m--mated?!" the medicine cat gasped louder. "YOU CAN'T TELL A SOUL UNLESS YOU WANNA GO LIVE WITH STARCLAN!!!!!" Blackrose hissed. Then, a ginger cat moved into the den, and got closer to the two she-cats. "Firestar!!" Northpointe gasped. "Get away from my mate!!!" he clawed Northpointe across her small face, and then she blacked out. |
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Post by Moony™ on Mar 7, 2009 12:57:44 GMT -5
Hey Blackrose, it's nice for you to be RPing and posting... and you're awesome at it. But remember that you cannot control other characters! 
For example, it's Chasm's right to control Nothpointe, as you control Blackrose. Also, Chasm haven't been on for a long time.. so I think it'd be best to try another thread. Thanks!
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Post by blackrose9994 on Mar 7, 2009 22:45:45 GMT -5
wow...ive been breakin the rules lately!!! im soooo srry for the infractions...and i didn't no u coodnt conrol others...cuz it makes my stories interesting. I got a letter from a friend asking me what the other cats were doing...so i made the story alittle controlling. again im sooo srry, and i hope there is someway i can fix it!!! can u help me out little, moony? im new to this and it is hard 4 me 2 write anything without the help of others. im writing this after my new post under "Wandering...", so now i no. my friend has posted soem controlling things to control mine..do u need premission or something? srry this is a long post...haha!  thnx 4 all ur help...and plz WRITE BACK!!!!!!! -blackrose |
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Post by Moony™ on Mar 8, 2009 15:44:12 GMT -5
check your PM 
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