George
Caramel
I'm a pirate, and I go RAWR.
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Apr 9, 2009 19:45:00 GMT -5
Post by George on Apr 9, 2009 19:45:00 GMT -5
Little puppy,
DON'T FOLLOW ME HOME! I am sick and weak, just like you. But i can relate to you, I usually can't with others. You look at me with big eyes, you look so cold in the snow, i carefully bend down, and i pick you up puppy,
BUT JUST FOR NOW...
-Foxie
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Apr 10, 2009 17:34:25 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Apr 10, 2009 17:34:25 GMT -5
Eyes like chocolate, left in the sun, melting my heart, before I've begun.
Eyes like flame, full of light, ready for fun, and ready for flight.
Eyes like blankets, soft and warm, prepared to comfort, but ready to perform.
--skip
{kinda sucks...oh well.}
Eyes like
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George
Caramel
I'm a pirate, and I go RAWR.
Posts: 190
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Apr 10, 2009 19:59:10 GMT -5
Post by George on Apr 10, 2009 19:59:10 GMT -5
You left me in the streets, to die, alone. Cold, crying, I fight for life. Death is apon me, my eyes close for the last time, when a man picks me up. He calls me his own, I reach up, as if to say thanks, I never did get to thank him. The cold was to much that night... I float up, seeing him cry in pain, It wasn't your fault... I whisper to myself I wish i could say thanks for saving me, when no one else did.
-Foxie
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Apr 11, 2009 9:05:42 GMT -5
Post by b√αиk on Apr 11, 2009 9:05:42 GMT -5
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Apr 11, 2009 21:08:17 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Apr 11, 2009 21:08:17 GMT -5
Mockery
You are a psuedo bohemian mockery of an iconoclastic nonbeliever.
You want to launch the initiation of an alternative nation where everything is fueled by the belief of the luminosity of humanity itself.
We aren't genius's, we aren't hippies, hell! we aren't even artistic!
So don't call yourself a flower child don't call yourself a virtuoso, a prodigy, a free spirit & expect us to fall in like soldiers of war.
We will not succumb to your counterfeit lies & austere doctrine and protocol like feeble insects of lesser rank and if that is what you believe you are fallacious in that statement.
We are concerned of our welfare and in a matter such as this one we can & will psychologically sabbatage your clan.
With power laid upon your hands the world as we know it shall fail.
All will be annihilated if sovereignty is in your favor, but by holy luck and chance that is not what the old prophet tells.
He says, that with great logic and sweet musings we will overthrow the surrogate society that holds us prisoners and shall call ourselves "Non Conformists" and we will give the gentle, yet untamed and savage gift of free will to anyone who will accept our meager offering.
--skip
ooc: I just want to let everyone know that this poem is in character, not as myself speaking, and yes I did use the h word, but its in character. i hope that's allowed...cause thats the best word for this poem in that spot...eek sorry! when you read it, imagine it sounding kind of fed up and slightly ticked off and angry. PS: hehe I dug deep into my vocabulary for this one...haha it took a while though.
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Apr 12, 2009 17:36:11 GMT -5
Post by b√αиk on Apr 12, 2009 17:36:11 GMT -5
WOW. THAT'S SO COOL! and different i think you need to start posting your poems to the world my friend.
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Apr 13, 2009 11:43:48 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Apr 13, 2009 11:43:48 GMT -5
Haha thanks Blank. OMG I was looking for that Equestrain Challenge game this morning cause' I just found the case for it but it didn't have the game in it and I got a desperate craving to play it when I saw the case. {I didn't find it...} But when I was searching I found a green notebook and opened it to a random page and found that poem I wrote right after reading Twilight! I reread it and omg it sucked. It was so funny though cause that the time I thought it had turned out really good...
Well at least it seems I've improved a bit. Writing them so much seems to help alot. XD
This poem is all about the little hilarious comments rob makes in the audio commentary of Twilight...
Silly Apotamkin
Silly Apotamkin, always lost in vibrant lies, you told me never trust a man who plucks the hair above his eyes!
But did I listen? No, I just had to 'rock the boat' And get helplessly drawn in by your gelled bouffant and customized pea coat!
It's hard for me to kiss you, even upon my bed, for your rock hard hair could knock me out, if I don't get the right angle on your very flat head!
--skip
hehe, short but sweet, didn't want to make it too long or else the funny-ness would drain, but I mean seriously ALL the things rob says in the commentary are hysterical, so I could go on and on...XD XD XD
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George
Caramel
I'm a pirate, and I go RAWR.
Posts: 190
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poems
Apr 13, 2009 19:28:35 GMT -5
Post by George on Apr 13, 2009 19:28:35 GMT -5
Tiny prison girl, look up to the stars, everything will get better soon... Angel in the clouds, she will save you, as she saved me.
It was cold the day i died, as you can tell by me clothes, thin and ragged, i died swiftly. The Angel saved me, gave me food and warmth, then she left, and i am wandering.
Careful little girl, i will guide you to her, don't trip on the STAIRWAY TO HEAVEN.... -Foxie
OCC: i got this idea from a plaque in my Grandpa's yard that he put there after my Grandma died....snif... [/center]
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Apr 14, 2009 6:37:33 GMT -5
Post by b√αиk on Apr 14, 2009 6:37:33 GMT -5
haha Apotampkin is about rob!
we made a deal safe with a seal no longer am i strong i can fight this demon that is stored inside me i'll break the deal, and win this. i can feel the power it's a rain shower
he grins evily that weird, ugly smirk he thinks he knows everything though i know he's bizarre i trust the light and the goddess within she'll kill the dark and help me win an immortal danger his black wings sky high we thrust him away with our Cheeroke cry We are safe We have won But the danger has barley started
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Apr 17, 2009 18:32:12 GMT -5
Post by b√αиk on Apr 17, 2009 18:32:12 GMT -5
This is a poem about my sister whom I look up to. She has had an eating disorder since she was 13 and I recently learned about it 6 months ago. She has been trying to get rid of it and recently she went away for about 4 months to fix it. She's come back now and she has a schedule and everything but she still struggles. I think My sister is my hero and she has accomplished so much and I'm proud. So here's a poem about her struggle to reach the top. This poem is from her point of view seeing as I tried to be in her shoes and understand what it's like
{s t i l l * g o i n g }I think I’m dreamin’ I might be leavin’ I can almost feel it It’s reeling me in One step forward With two steps back My assurance wavers The pressure pushing me under I must surface With my chin up Those who make me feel inferior Will see me in first-class Barriers blocking my path But I’m not feeble I will be sturdy My reminder of why I’m trying It may take awhile With wobbles here and there I’ll have injuries to wear as a crown It’s a vigorous battle And I might fail sometimes I won’t be a disappointment But I must face it head on Propelling myself forward Against the wind Spreading my wings Thinking about those who have faith in me I will reach the crest A delight in the panorama Understanding that my destination is reached Exit the ramp and continuing on To the next flight I might have made it But theirs more goals And it isn’t about the speed Or how long But about how I get there ~ bl a nk
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Apr 20, 2009 16:21:18 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Apr 20, 2009 16:21:18 GMT -5
ooh brava blank!!
-- You -- You're holding back not showing everything you got,
Going around acting like somebody your definitely not,
That's not what we intended surely not like we had thought,
We want you for you no, we haven't forgot. --skip
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Apr 20, 2009 17:03:12 GMT -5
Post by b√αиk on Apr 20, 2009 17:03:12 GMT -5
That sounds like a Paramore song....but i like it.
here comes the end it's closing in i'll have to say goodbye please don't shed a tear don't suffer due to my cause advance without me but continue on without me i am starting over something brand-new
~ blank
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Apr 29, 2009 19:45:01 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Apr 29, 2009 19:45:01 GMT -5
ooh blankeh I likeh.
I'm in love.
and I hate.
A stream of sweat glistens on my face, shimmers upon my arms, dampens my chest.
It wells in the creases of my old hands, marking out clear, salt-bedded rivers.
I push through the air, thick and hot and heavy, listening to the soles of my shoes pounding softly on the grass.
{Not Done}
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Apr 30, 2009 15:30:54 GMT -5
Post by b√αиk on Apr 30, 2009 15:30:54 GMT -5
wish i had
In the days that come, life grows still. The surroundings a blur, going by quicker.
My emotion bottled away, letting it rot and decay. Breath comes in rasps, with sharp gentle taps.
Memory falls short, Faint images of the past. Don’t know how long it’ll last, It could be a day or even a year.
Can’t foretell, But I know I’m in a never-ending spell. Apart, now, from my previous self, All my years of living gone away like a cleared shelf.
I know it’s the end, I can’t help but weep. I should have known, Life was more deep.
My past seems dreary, I feel weary. Wish I had spoken, I love you more often
~ blankeh
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Apr 30, 2009 20:34:03 GMT -5
Post by miss. s k i p on Apr 30, 2009 20:34:03 GMT -5
Magical blankets team spirit go colons eat your veggies it helps on tv i watch the ad oh em gee it's micheal phelps.
ehhh i am too tired to think straight. no good poems coming now. blehh
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