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Post by Winter on May 11, 2008 4:54:37 GMT -5
-applauses- Incredible! Simply incredible. |
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Post by froststar on May 11, 2008 7:05:10 GMT -5
Aaa, i'll give it a go... Can I feel the light betray me?
Open my eyes so I can see.
I've been in darkness for so long,
I havn't heard any speak or song.
StarClan's mercy falling down like rain,
As it falls down I feel pure pain.
But I shouldn't worry, I won't die,
For I can spread my wings and fly.
Our day is not for a long while yet,
Have courage, and do not regret.
That you are as special as everyone around you,
The rain falls down, just like new.
And now that my story is almost done,
I'd like you to know that you can be the one. Gawd... i'm usually better than this. |
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Post by Moony™ on May 11, 2008 9:55:35 GMT -5
You're welcome! And ooh, I like the poem, Frosty. It's relieving with hope and sincerity. =) Ahhh....
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Post by invaderbluefur on May 13, 2008 5:21:50 GMT -5
You have my vote...I'm actually good at angst or comedy only 0.o...
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Post by Moony™ on May 25, 2008 16:58:19 GMT -5
by Serenechaos
It's coming...
Falling from the starry night,
Starlight, starbright, what goes on tonight?
As we adventure out into the night,
Skimming across unwalked paths
Something mysterious, yet luring
Approaches
As delicate as a crystal,
As beautiful as the stars
Farther and farther.
To something new, unique,
May we pledge our honor,
Appreciate the grace,
Softly sigh as it hits our face
StarClan's mercy falling down like rain
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By Invaderbluefur
Nothing To Fear
When times are dark
When blood has spilt
The rain will come
The rains of mercy
They'll wash away
All the fear
For StarClan is watching
There is nothing to fear
It is their waters that cleanse
StarClan's mercy falls like rain
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By Destiny
Can you hear it, softly falling?
Can you see it, shimmering through the air?
Though you may try through songs and calling,
You will never see it up there.
This rain that falls is secret,
A whisper unknown to all.
And yet if in our faith we are set,
We can hear it in our own call.
StarClan's rain of gentle mercy falls upon us now,
And though we may never see or hear it,
One day we may know how,
The stars of Silverpelt shine to fit,
The lives of the cats here below.
So join the Clans who pray to them who live in the sky,
And whose mercy through everything they show.
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By Frosty
Can I feel the light betray me?
Open my eyes so I can see.
I've been in darkness for so long,
I havn't heard any speak or song.
StarClan's mercy falling down like rain,
As it falls down I feel pure pain.
But I shouldn't worry, I won't die,
For I can spread my wings and fly.
Our day is not for a long while yet,
Have courage, and do not regret.
That you are as special as everyone around you,
The rain falls down, just like new.
And now that my story is almost done,
I'd like you to know that you can be the one.
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By Centerpatch
StarClan Watches
The cats
Know that
StarClan is
Watching Over Them
Telling them What
Is Going To Happen
They Predict
And Save
The Clans
From Any Trouble
That Might
Lead Death
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Post by centerpatch on May 25, 2008 18:20:53 GMT -5
Wait can I enter? Mine is:
StarClan Watches
The cats
Know that
StarClan is
Watching Over Them
Telling them What
Is Going To Happen
They Predict
And Save
The Clans
From Any Trouble
That Might
Lead Death
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Post by Moony™ on May 26, 2008 11:18:42 GMT -5
Yeah sure, I'm just about the close this contest and choosing the winner. Good poem Centerpatch, thanks for entering!
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Post by froststar on May 27, 2008 2:53:49 GMT -5
Well, I know one thing.
I'm not gonna win. Yours are all so much better than mine.
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Post by Moony™ on May 27, 2008 5:21:20 GMT -5
xD actually, I was stuck between yours Frosty and Destiny's. I really loved your poem, especially how it went from dark to light, and love the meaning. =)
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Post by Winter on May 27, 2008 9:40:37 GMT -5
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Post by Moony™ on May 27, 2008 14:58:37 GMT -5
Uh huh! =3
That's gonna be a real help to me.
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Post by froststar on May 29, 2008 13:41:21 GMT -5
oooo, really?? Thats so cool. SQUEE! xD
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Post by Moony™ on May 29, 2008 13:42:09 GMT -5
Uh huh! =)
Me and Winter a deciding which is to win. Maybe we could combine them. xD
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Post by harrald on May 30, 2008 13:40:30 GMT -5
They Are A Bit Late. Some Have The Line, Others Sound Better Without;
A Wind Rustles Through
Steals The Dusk
StarClan's Mercy
Falling Down
Like Rain
Upon A Silver Stone
Birds Sing
Bells Ring
Slowly From Your Hiding Place
Creep Black And Blue To Dawn
- - -
Sparking
Glittering
Flicking
Flittering
Red, Blue, Gold
White As Snow.
Reach Out A Single Paw.
And Try To Touch
You Love Them Much
The Stars You Call Your Own.
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Stars
White Spirits
Glowing Through Night
Like Illuminated Silver Stones
Lighting An Icy Black Pool
We Call Them Our Strong Leaders
But They Are Merely Our Humble Friends.
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In Heat Of Battle
I Watch The Poor Souls
Death Engulfing Cat After Cat.
Yet It Is Only A Dream
One We Can Change
They Say You Cannot Change Nature,
But I Feel Change Is Nature.
And As StarClan's Mercy
Falls Down Like Rain
Upon Our Heads, Remember
We Have The Power To Change The World.
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A Wary Eye
Cast Up To The Sky
And It Wonders 'Why?'
Why Are The Trees Fare?
Why Do The Birds Sing?
Why Do The Stars Shine?
And As The Stars Pour Out
From Their Resting Place,
They Tell Him,
"The Trees Are Fare To Give Your World Beauty.
The Birds Sing To Fill Us With Song.
We Shine For You To Say
We Are Always Watching."
- - -
As StarClan's Mercy Fell
Down Like Rain,
One Contrite Heart
Just Wished And Sang,
"I Wish The World Happy!
No Fighting Or Fear!
That Love Always Will Be!
Hearts Filled With Good Cheer!"
But In A Dream, His Wish Came True
And He Nearly Went Insane.
Until He Sang Another Song,
Thanking Stars For The World
They Gave.
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Post by harrald on Jun 4, 2008 8:34:10 GMT -5
Moony, did you get my other poems up yet? Here's another, based on the plotline;
Sunshine lifts me.
Water shifts me.
Only now do I see
As StarClan's mercy
Falls down with the rain
Like tears, of joy.
They send hope,
A butterfly to light
On hopeless flower.
And I know now,
This is my home
Forever more.
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